i'm flying higher than vinsanity
360 windmill this is insanity
i drove in to the rim
and messed him up
with my slick moves
kick in new groves
i can shoot threes
im hotter than ninety degrees
jordan got nothing on me
you see i am the next phenom
someone that you can count on
averaging 65 points a game
you all will know my name
alley oop, i be tearing down the hoop
draining 3's like theres no hope of stoping me
raining down tear drops like hip hop beats
i got t-macs on my feet
aiite firstly get ya 2 links 2 other o.ms u left feed & this shiit needs alotta work.. get me... no hate just elavate aiite... cah this kinda shiits been done millions of times, & ya shiit it 2 simple... be creative, go in depth & be individual....
''Crying Is Blackmail''
add links man
you rhyme is eazy like abc it took me 4 sec to read it
i undestand cuz you a noob so dawg just dont give just keep rhymin and listen to feed
No hate iight
Your rhyme scheme is too simple, your topic couldn't develop due to this and therefore this OM lets you down, furthermore, next time ya make an OM make sure ya go over it, re-read it 2-3 times and try and get someone else to read it and see what they think, by doing that you will slowly but surely develop....Keep poppin
"JORDAN GOT NUTTIN ON ME" PLEASE...
Yo u tlkin bout playskool rim or what?
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damn dont just say he sucks tell him what he need to do to improve
Closed. I'd say follow the rules, but since you seen unable to i'm just gonna get you banned instead.
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