The Art of NiNjah

[NiNjah Red]

Rollin wit soldiers who grip clips
when shit hits the switch you’ll remain a silent witness
So, keep ya head ducked b4 that red blood
merges with the water lyin underneath the viaduct
It’s NiNjah pullin weight like tow-trucks
I stay pro-plus composite, the opposite of u low fucks
Criminologist, it’s the lethal arsonist
blazin philosophic, word up the ghetto prophet lives
resist n perish, this focus is deep-seated
smashin walls of silence if my speech is impeded
my flow’s cyclone, blowin brains in syndromes
martial artist, my Thai kicks hit wit golden shinbones
throwin dices with da dirty dozen
they cop long-shooters in da boot’a da Volkswagen
hot Lugar’s from Germany in da armoury
got economy lock stock n harmony,
I disappear n kids is like “yo where could Osama be?


Freeheezy



Links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270065
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=271070

[NiNjah Red]

upto da top


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^^^

[Whysguyy]

you gots potential.
good flow idea, most of it was smooth.

It’s NiNjah pullin weight like tow-trucks
I stay pro-plus composite, the opposite of u low fucks

^ that was cold, wasnt the hardest hitting punch but it was just so well put together and smooth it was good


Criminologist, it’s the arsonist
blazin philosophic, word up the ghetto prophet lives
resist n perish, this focus is deep-seated
smashin walls of silence if my speech is impeded

thats where it gets choppy. the first line mostly. I think it may be because of the bigger words not flowing with eachother. the last line starts to flow a little better though


they cop long-shooters in da boot’a da Volkswagen
hot Lugar’s from Germany

^made last lines choppy - just could have been worded better to flow
....in da armoury
got economy lock stock n harmony,
I disappear n kids is like “yo where could Osama be?

that was flowing like it should. just leave osama alone he old news



you got potential man. I know you can flow,make a whole verse smooth like those lines i said was cold, i want to see it.



-slow

[NiNjah Red]

yeah safe bro fosho 4 da lookout.. just gotta maybe go over it again with some headphones on with a beat to catch those choppy parts

i dunno i i kno osama old news but i just liked the rhyme sounding so much.. plus he is nstill on the run so i thought yeah

just trynna put my audio ideas accross and flow constant

n i just changed that arsonist line yeah.. added a couple syllables

safe 4 da feed1