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Thread: just a keystyle

  1. #1
    baggz
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    just a keystyle

    look,its that nigga money baggz comin at-chu//
    tha one who spits the facts-dude,leaving niggaz minds stiffer then a statue//
    i'm sick on the mic, ha-chu!//
    i do what i do wit no regrets-at all//
    not the type to buy begets-at the mall//
    forget the diamond rings and cars,i'm saving for that big-house//
    half ya'll lyrics i'm findin them in songs,claimin more then what came out ya big-mouth//
    cmon lets keep it real half ya'll can't rhyme at-all//
    like half the rappers whos fallin-off//
    i'm callin ya'll bluff,like a crack head gettin high off tylenol//
    or like ya'll kids claimin they poppin guns but can't load-one//
    or own-one and keep it in they pocket//
    to scared or to weak to pull it out cock it and pop-it//
    but one things for sure this site i'm bout to lock-it//

    "just fuckin around get at me"

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    nice work

  3. #3
    baggz
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    can i get some more feedback?

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    no.

    you need to follow the rules man, and this was not good at all, you got lots of work ahead of you.

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    not bad, i can telll ur new but ya got potential. Try being more creative with the punches and metaphors. Also try 2 throw in sum multis
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    Closed. What Bounce said.

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