u like? yeah we deffo do another collab... u hit me up it u got topic, or i will aiite...Originally Posted by 8LiVeS
u like? yeah we deffo do another collab... u hit me up it u got topic, or i will aiite...
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iight i will get at cha in a while....now come on yall....dont get afarid to leave some feedback
word^
uppin dis....................
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ay yo snypah im out for a lil while...i will get bak at cha....holla
cool ^^^ tc1
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Hey babe Favo line
It started off with my dad and mom throwing me a one in a lifetime event
All the money they had was supposed to go to rent, and celebrate lent
And then my girl comes into play, I see a hickie on her boob, that time was spent
8lives fav
See u father of a yute now u need 2 focus on a plan
With all the shiit that’s gone on u can stil be her man
Get ya implement straight & concentrate on tha kid
Cah if u stil mad, in future u gon’ be sayin “i wish i did
nice ass drop u two hot ness
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thanx sexy.... lol feed appriciated....1
& i ent pregnant... hell naw i ent!!! lol
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aiite uppin dis bitch....i'm gone so don't sleep on it!!!
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i like the emotion u 2 put in2 the piece...it really hit home 4 some of us
u could relate 2 it either personal like or from watchin from da outside--
there was good imagery that u built & it was ez 2 follow cuz u could tell it came from pers. exp.--props
not 2 much u could really work on so just keep @ it -k-
& both of u, return the feed if getz the chance...Gracias!
"Letter From A Ryder"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270190
nice flo n nice text layput..story stayed well on point...could of done with some more wordplay or metaphors perhaps to give it more creativity and deepness..expression was good..not sure i liked some of the rhymes much.. ending was a bit meh in particular
mostly was worded pretty well tho in poetic sense.. so yeah was a str8 read.. just keep on addin on elements to increase the skill rate
pz
i memba u fron somewhere... cant memba dow... ah well my bad.. lol
thanx for tha feed aiite....
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aiite cool hun i get cha... thanx for takin tha time 2 read it dow.... feed appriciated....1
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ya used alot of emotion and it worked well u werent forcing rhymes att all mad good piece you had some niice one liners surrounded by a niice piece so it just made everything look good i like ur style keep up and good luck witht he rest of ur OMs
Hey Laydee I've learned to post pics thanks!!!!!
thanx for feed kos...
uppin dis............
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