yo,this is ma 1st ever piece in open mic,so it aint going to be that hot but we all gotta start somewhere
Hook: shes gone,she aint coming back no more
how ever much you pray she aint eva come back through dat door
she is no more 6 ft below da floor
1/She gave birth to you,cared for you,looked after you
when she was here,you had no fear of her leaving ur world~she was ur world
ur star,your sun,you light she always did you right
your 1st day at school,she was wid u every step of the way
you was young you tought shed always be by ya side,never go away~she picked you up everyday without fail
in sun,rain,snow or gail
BUT NOW...
Hook: shes gone,she aint coming back no more
how ever much you pray she aint eva come back through dat door
she is no more 6 ft below da floor
2/i grew older got other intersts,i started 2 fink i didnt need you no more.
now after school i started going to the pool with my friends.
i thought she no longer cared but little did i know she was always standing there.
watching me move on
she thinks i forgot how she brought me up..little does she know that i appreciate everything she gave me,everything i got
BUT NOW....
Hook: shes gone,she aint coming back no more
how ever much you pray she aint eva come back through dat door
she is no more 6 ft below da floor
3/as we grew,we started 2 part,i didnt like it wen she wud lay down the law
we wud arque,fight....almost turn into a brawl.
we never spoke,then u turn around nd tell me were broke
i didnt understand,everything seemed so perfect
our rowls must of took effect.
you told me you cudnt cope,you were resorting to smoking the dope.
i walk back from school alone,remembering the times you were by my side~fuck how did i let it slide?
i open the door.walk in school bag on the table
sat there just waiting for you to come through that door and put things straight~~i cudnt wait~everything was going to be so great
i walked upstairs nothing seemed right
bathroom door open
SHIT,there she is sprawled out on the bathroom floor,i guess this is out punishment but what for?
well at leastshes gone to heaven
fuck it,MUM IMA MISS U 24/7
Hook: shes gone,she aint coming back no more
how ever much you pray she aint eva come back through dat door
she is no more 6 ft below da floor
please can ya drop me some feedback,what u fink of this ?