10 lines
house rules
due in 20 mins
g' luck
-PaNiC-
status_unknown
10 lines
house rules
due in 20 mins
g' luck
This aint a star~war kid this another attack of the clones
Cuz how u consider urself dope and ur status unknown
Never gonna beat me u’d be better off if u panic
Cuz u couldn’t win in this battle wit all ur dick fanatics
Ill throw hits and strike u out like u a fucking pin head
Ull be so played, people would think uve already been dead
Come at me scared asking for 20 minutes wit hesitation
Cuz testing the lyrical will get u clapped like a standin ovation
Gonna finish this off come on I new that this battle was fair
Like the front of bear caves,
………………………. Ill let u be the sign that says beware
Should I be scared, is it a thug, Panic you bring your squad wit cha
Wait a sec, I seen your lyrics you only good for hard pictures
But let's see the other flix of your moms chokin your ass
Screamin "Stop trying to be a rapper and quit smoking my stash"
So you have to come better is that the only style you brought
Or your mama put you up to this to get me back for child support
So don't hate on what a veteran's got
Cause your skills like a PS3, you wish you had it, but its not in stock
After I nut in ya girls mouth she told me all the post that you got
In hopes that you stop, being the product of an overdose on Tupac..
Yeah..
This aint a star~war kid this another attack of the clones
Cuz how u consider urself dope and ur status unknown
Come at me scared asking for 20 minutes wit hesitation
Cuz testing the lyrical will get u clapped like a standin ovation
BEST LINES O.K VERSE FOR A NOWEIGHT
VS.
So you have to come better is that the only style you brought
Or your mama put you up to this to get me back for child support
So don't hate on what a veteran's got
Cause your skills like a PS3, you wish you had it, but its not in stock
BEST LINE VOTED BAD THOUGH
V//PANIC FOR HAVIN A BETTER VERSE HE HAD BETTER WORDPLAY
AND STATUS IF U JUS WORED THOSE PUNCHES BETETR U WOULD OF WON
BOTH YALL HIT UP THE 1ST BATTLE IN MY SIG.
This aint a star~war kid this another attack of the clones
Cuz how u consider urself dope and ur status unknown
^^lmao nice
Never gonna beat me u’d be better off if u panic
Cuz u couldn’t win in this battle wit all ur dick fanatics
^^ugh not feelin much
Ill throw hits and strike u out like u a fucking pin head
Ull be so played, people would think uve already been dead
^^its igh
Come at me scared asking for 20 minutes wit hesitation
Cuz testing the lyrical will get u clapped like a standin ovation
^^igh nice wordplay
Gonna finish this off come on I new that this battle was fair
Like the front of bear caves,
………………………. Ill let u be the sign that says beware
^^not that much of a punch
Should I be scared, is it a thug, Panic you bring your squad wit cha
Wait a sec, I seen your lyrics you only good for hard pictures
^^nope..not feelin it
But let's see the other flix of your moms chokin your ass
Screamin "Stop trying to be a rapper and quit smoking my stash"
^^NO real punch
So you have to come better is that the only style you brought
Or your mama put you up to this to get me back for child support
^^ugh,nah
So don't hate on what a veteran's got
Cause your skills like a PS3, you wish you had it, but its not in stock
^^nice
After I nut in ya girls mouth she told me all the post that you got
In hopes that you stop, being the product of an overdose on Tupac..
^^playd concept
panic--you had a dope opener, then fell off a lil bit, but u had some good punches juss some of them i personally didnt feel..good structure,wordplay..etc
status--you had no real standout punches, u rarely came with a personal which definetly made ur verse blah, ok structure, wordplay could have been better, and i def thoguht u coudl have set up ur punches better...
VOTE--honestly...... PANIC, status u were right there with things, u juss never seemd to put it all 2gether....i think in the future try adding personals..cuz some of ur punches juss didnt land...igh definetly NO HATE!
v/ -Panic-
opening line killed it.
no hate status .. just honest vote. yours wasn't as good in my eyes as panic's.
vote-panic
punches-panic
metas-none
flow-status
structure-panic
personals-none
really this was pretty close if you think about it....
but panic had more punches that hit harder so i give
him my vote.
no hate, just honest voter.
uppin #1
uppin #2
Vote -panic
Better all around verse. STATUS, u had ok attempts at wordplay and punches, but King's was just too hard and connected better
if i could i'd vote panic in this...no hate tho
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panic betta overall verse
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check this its da movement baby
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