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^Who the fuck? ....Uppin for feed...
nice peice an it flowed good good story an overall just a great peice
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This piece was just al over ill man, your flow was on point, nice original topic. Your wordplay was nice and you expressed your emotions very nice. Few nice multi's there aswell. Nice easy to read peice
"I'm so full of life, crowds hate me...but I am loved by she,
If loving is the enemy, you'd better charge a finders fee,
Like new three ringed binders, won't get nuthin outta me-
And I'm so poor when it comes to being the oh so wealthy."
U ended this nice. All over loved the drop boy.
Keep spittin and elevating.
Peace
p.s hit me up on Random Spit!
Last edited by ExPlOsIvE; January 5th, 2006 at 10:11 PM
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