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Thread: ...confuzed & complicated...

  1. January 20th, 2006, 03:43 PM #1
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    Question ...confuzed & complicated...

    aiite mind da structure itz kinda fuked up stil..
    dis took me like 20 minutez 2 write so jus leme no wha ya fink..




    Met u as a stranger then i took u as a fren,,,
    It wernt bou sparkin up da bluntz or rollin in a benz,,,
    Not even hangin out 2getha or chilin aroun,,,
    Bway u became summit special 2me, a feelin i foun,,,
    Didnt say nuffin 2u kept it all inside myself,,,
    Until wun day we got talkin... u told me how u felt,,,
    Dat was da bes bit gettin all my emotions out,,,
    It was hard at first but then i fort itz gota be dun now,,,
    We became an item, days passed we got closer,,,
    Had our ups & downz.... & at times i fort it was over,,,
    Darlin being wit u was different & so niice,,,
    I knew u was da wun fo me baby bway u wah so rite,,,
    We both had own life wit our own problemz,,,
    Bway fa real jus chatin 2 u was like u had solved em,,,
    So much lurv so much missin, i want dem hugz mis da kissin,,,
    U live milez away...so itz da voice i get 2 listen,,,
    So sexy.. getz me weak, i lurv dem eyez, jus let me speak,,,
    Da truth baby, u had changed me so i lurved u so,,,
    But then fingz began 2 fuk up & u didnt believe me oh no,,,
    Nufin mattered 2 u no mo, u got mad at me fo sho,,,
    Then i fort dat itz bes if we both went our separate ways,,,
    we both nu it wud be hard if we went dem ways,,,
    my feelinz i didnt wana share wit u, yeah i stil care 4 u,,,
    & if eva u need me az a fren ima be there 4 u,,,
    Deep down inside i stil know & believe u da wun 4 me,,,
    makin & breakin up is 2much same tym i wan u T,,,
    But i’m confuzed & i’m lost wot decisions should i make???
    Wit my own problemz 2, how much decisions can i take,,,
    Stil we kool now we frenz but itz hard 2 even be,,,
    Dis time da truth wil alwayz stay hidden...i mis u & me,,,
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  2. January 20th, 2006, 03:48 PM #2
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  3. January 20th, 2006, 03:55 PM #3
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  4. January 20th, 2006, 03:59 PM #4
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  5. January 21st, 2006, 02:24 PM #5
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  6. January 22nd, 2006, 11:15 AM #6
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  7. January 22nd, 2006, 11:24 AM #7
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  8. January 22nd, 2006, 11:38 AM #8
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    thanx kid! ^^^ & it was summit i jus wrote down kwik so............
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  9. January 22nd, 2006, 12:44 PM #9
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  10. January 22nd, 2006, 02:30 PM #10
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    its good but try to not rush it and take off all dem ,,,,, stuff aight

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  11. January 23rd, 2006, 02:06 PM #11
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    yea yea kool kon i get cha... fanx..

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  12. January 23rd, 2006, 02:16 PM #12
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    liked it, elevate though and get more creative

    heres my open mic, tell me what you think
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  13. January 23rd, 2006, 02:45 PM #13
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    you need to try to slow down when you typin the shit up because it was a hard read and when i say hard it was very hard to understand what you ment when you where sayin what you had to say you show tighten up the structer and add better wordplay, also you shoud increase your vocabulary and maybe it would be better but other than that advice the only thing i can say is elevate
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  14. January 23rd, 2006, 02:53 PM #14
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    i'm workin on my vocab, wordplay & structure n e wayz... yep! n i am elavatin..
    yea fanx killa & lyrically inclined...
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  15. January 23rd, 2006, 03:32 PM #15
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    good structure and flow.. i'd say content could be a bit deeper.. a few rhymes got a bit basic.. but worked in a poetic basic sense.. your good at puttin da emotion into a piece with your voice coming thru well.. just keep adding in lyrical elements ie mettas..wordplay.. and it will grow doper n iller all the way...

    was a pleasant reading in many parts

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