The Realm of Escape

[MakeShyft]

This was pretty dope.

Lines were clean and straight up.

Jacob sighed, concluded his life, and made an approval nod
Jacob died, escaped from his life, as he climbed up the steps to God

I liked the way this line rhymed off, good conclusion. Seen this topic a couples of tymes, diff. kinna prroach here. word.

RTF WarHead (It's near the top)

Pz.

[Fracture]

thanks.

[Fracture]

bump

[Code Red]

Dope drop
U had it all vocab emotion creativity flow multi structure and wordplay the work u did a real good job on this fam I enjoyed readin it fo real man

[Fracture]

thanks

[Chrit.]

fuck anyone that bites a legends name

[Baron Mynd]

You arent THE Frac, and I hate the fact you share his name because that will bring you tons of flack while you're on the net bro, change your name. BUT, with that said, you arent a bad storyteller. This was pretty good, very well told and wrote well, you had good direction to it, imagery and emotion were there, but could use a little work. On the scheme-side of things, you seem to have a grasp of rhyme-schemes, but could develop that further, and once you start getting multis throw into that mix as well, you could be a pretty potent topical head .. You remind me of me actually! Haha, it seems stupid saying that - but the styles SO similar to how I wrote it's ridiculous. I'd love to take you in as a project and help you progress, possibly collab too.

Madd props on this - But change your name!

[Fracture]

lol ok i'll see what i can do about getting a name change. Thanks for ur feed, and ill look into multis and such so I can elevate as u said. Thanks for the feed again.

Rise for feed.

[LamaGod]

is this the real fract from bboys and rm?

[LamaGod]

lol ok i'll see what i can do about getting a name change. Thanks for ur feed, and ill look into multis and such so I can elevate as u said. Thanks for the feed again.

Rise for feed.

oh.. your not fract then??

change your name man. cause your making him look bad. no beef or nothing, just the truth

[LamaGod]

not only is this fracture a imposter

but the other piece he dropped he bit from richard corey

so this dude is both a fake and a BITER

someone ban this faggot ass biting imposter please ASAP

[dotGod]

You're a name and OM biter???

Jesus... atleast bite the person who you stole the name from!

[Mic Booth]

this was probably bitten too then hmm

[Siege]

You're a name and OM biter???

Jesus... atleast bite the person who you stole the name from!

lol.......

[J.J]

wow where the fuck did u bite from this time