i dunno man, this is rap not poetry, atleast make it look like a rap verse...16 lines you know.......or do you
you got writing skill but rap man, RAPbattlesdotcom
not poetryslamatthecoffeehousedotcom
but elevate homey.. its key
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i dunno man, this is rap not poetry, atleast make it look like a rap verse...16 lines you know.......or do you
you got writing skill but rap man, RAPbattlesdotcom
not poetryslamatthecoffeehousedotcom
but elevate homey.. its key
peep I Spit For
lmfao at that. feed. 99% of legendary/OMHOF pieces are like this.... this sint poetry, or rap. its writing.
yea, you write, but i was in legends with gangsta peices, so, dont get it twisted, anyway peep me out lil homey
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really? i see no pieces in legends that are gangsta
Honestly, this was a good read. I was definately feeling the topic of what you're trying to say. Flow was great, I liked your word choice, and great job on the vocabulary. Big vocabulary= Powerful meaning (or at least that's what I think). Keep up the good work man.
Show some love: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=263374
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yo this was dope keep it up, flow was good, liked the topic, good structure..i liked this piece alot, u also had good vocab, pretty nice multies. overall this was dope, keep up the good work homie
th th th thanx
Niether of those links work, edit in 2 that do or this piece will be closed. Thanks.
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