Crew Battle: Enlightened Sanctum Vs Poetic justice: Frostbite Vs. Vortex

[Lyrical God]

10 lines
due 24 hours after both checkins
Checkin ASAP
No Crew votes (obviously)
No D/R Votes
No unexplained votes
Blah Blah Blah u kno the rest

Good Luck

[Code Red]

checkin

[The Vortex]

checkity check..

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[Code Red]

He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck
I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind
Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude
Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick
But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile

[The Vortex]

fuck it

dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain
Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit
& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill
I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus
slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame

[D. Jizzle.]

vortex- You had a good verse, good punches, flow was smooth, and your personals were decent. Try to give more of them though as they make your verse better. keep working on punches, yours were good but simply wording them better would have made your verse even better.

code- You had a decent verse also, but your verse could have been better if you worked on your personals more. The punches hit to hit him more.

V/vortex


plz hit up tha battles in my sig

no hate

[The Vortex]

yeah... aiite.. this is off to a slow start

bumps

[Katch-22]

He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck <--- bad personal

I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind<---good klow

Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude <---coulda worded it alot betta

Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick<---decent punch

But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile<--decent closer

vs

dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain <---good w/p & punch

Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit<---so-so...

& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill<--decent flow/punch

I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus<--no

slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame<---good personal/punch/closer

personals-vortex
punches-vortex
w/p - vortex
structure - vortex
creativity - vortex

no diss at all
i seen you come alot stronga red
maybe you were distracted or somethin
cuz this doesnt even seem like somethin you'd drop
cuz he's not this much better then you
but in this battle....he was

v-vortex

[Code Red]

Uppin #1

[The Vortex]

any more ups?

bump

[Ethical]

Code Red

He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck
Meh
I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind
ok
Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude
No
Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick
No
But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile
ok

This was ok...Not the best verse. One or Two good punches. No personals.Some multis. 7/10

vs

Vortex

dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain
No
Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit
Meh
& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill
Nice
I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus
No
slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame
Meh

Also not the best verse. Some good punches an some weak. Ok multis. Average vocab.
6.05/10

Vote= Code

Reason is because.....Some of vortex's punches didnt really fit well together. They had a filler...Close but he didnt get my vote in this battle

[Young_Block]

Code Red

He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck
Aight^not all dat
I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind
Nice
Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude
Nope
Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick
Nope
But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile
okie

vs

Vortex

dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain
No^^^
Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit
Ehh.No^^^
& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill
Aight^^
I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus
Nah B^^^
slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame
Okayy..ehhh^^^

V/Code for Being More Consistent more harder Punches and shit Nice Vortez ive seen better from u

[Nostradomus.]

V/ - Vortex.

Code Red you suck terribly.

[king_of_flowz]

yo dat battle was hot but im goin to give diz vote to vortex yo his punches were mad ill

[The Vortex]

bumps..