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    Exclamation Script of the God ( verse 1 )

    Verse 1

    I burst, on the first verse, perverse-thinking,
    seeking the worse, it hurts speaking these words ,
    I spurt metaphoric curse on your turf ,
    I lurk on your disturbed mental, mind spitting so much lyrics I thirst ,
    I verbally , defeat you, you heard of me ,
    I virtually, displaced your spliced minimal cells into misery,
    scientific eyes looking curiously ,
    wondering were I summon such a furious tendency to murder ,
    go menace and kill an enemy ,
    I preside to blind,
    a mentally fine though in your brain,
    with lyrical shine , I give chills to spines ,
    like a certain speck in the ground
    im hard to find ,
    my mind is thinking so fast,
    im leaving the past behind time,
    im destined to be a legend,
    something to spark up, all yall mentals,
    my style is heart stopping like clogged up heart vessels ,
    im stationary but kinetic force got me in motion ,
    killing many as I past threw ,
    contagious like flue without a remedy- potion ,
    im so ever full field,
    with the things that I build,
    flow, style and sickness,
    man I just go for the kill,

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    I live in a world,
    where it feels all its elements are against me ,
    I am the darkness of the night,
    until the ray of the sun fades me ,
    im so ill from this every day thoughts,
    your saying there’s a point in life
    but all I am really seeing is dots
    I will never rest in peace,
    until I stop this heart that beats
    good and evil
    I feel like my mind is where the beauty meets the beast ,
    im dying inside, luck is just a tease ,
    I feel like life is door, and there is no key

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    yo, this was dope mane. i liked it alot. your hook was the best part of the verse imo. the verse itself was good too. keep it up

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    word..
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    uppin on ma shit B

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    still uppin on fo fo's i dunno im bored someone plz comment on ma shit

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    This Was Iight
    Wordplay Was Meh
    Vocab Iight
    Flow Was Nice
    I Still Say U Could Elevate
    What I Didnt Like Was The Structure
    U Should Center It It Looks Alot Better
    Also Change The Font To Make It Look Better
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