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  1. January 8th, 2006, 12:46 AM #1
    Fo' Rilly
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    Filing Bankruptcy

    Filing Bankruptcy
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    12/25/05 @ 5:37 A.m.
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    I wake up to see moisture on my window, I’m excited for the celebration
    I scurry to my parents room, there gone, the sight left me in fascination
    I’m awed, I never thought that this would be the year they would be up 1st
    Little did my intellect know, that my family was going to be in for the worst
    I rush down the stairs, to see nothing in my stocking but a cheap novelty
    I never thought that all these years of my mother saying “its going be tight”
    ……………………….That this year would be the time we’re stuck with poverty
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    Been a horrific week, my relatives still haven’t sent any money of some-sort
    My Parents breaking down into tears on the phone with our local bank
    …………………………………………………………………….asking for financial support
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    I guess all these years I’ve been taking advantage of Christmas were gone
    But when I was living it up, I forgot Christmas was for giving and all the
    …………………………………………………………………………….Taking was wrong
    Now that I noticed this Sin I committed, I will always have to live in regret
    I never thought of it besides Gifts, which sent Jesus a bunch of disrespect
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    Why would I do this? I’ve had the best life I could live but now, I cant sleep
    Due to my power work, and I cant stand the fact of sleeping on dirty sheets
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    I’m trapped in a heart breaking prison, from my life being shady and abrupt
    But the worse part was having to watch my parents struggle to over come
    ……………………………………………………………………………………..Filing Bankrupt

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  2. January 8th, 2006, 02:02 PM #2
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  3. January 8th, 2006, 02:22 PM #3
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    i like tha flow nice job

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  4. January 8th, 2006, 02:27 PM #4
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    A straightforward topic with some nice imagery to back it up. Your vocab was at a decent level which made this easy to read. Some multi's would've been good to see. This is one of the better pieces i've read today, just focus on building up your imagery and keep coming with good topics and you'll stand out here.

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  5. January 8th, 2006, 02:27 PM #5
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  6. January 11th, 2006, 09:58 PM #6
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  7. January 11th, 2006, 10:01 PM #7
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  8. January 12th, 2006, 12:10 PM #8
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