Wasted Talent.

[Mystery~Murdera]

Hmm... nice to see you somewhat active.

Unbelievable seriously though.

So in the mean while, it seems i'll just compile pieces
that aren't Forever Ill & will forever be decent

amazing

Reassured by a meer.. compliment or vote of confidence...
or by a quote from a domininant poster with prominence.

by same game i've meticuously aimed at & missed.
I trained to spit, but never got passed save & print.
The only one to blame is Rich. Im short changing my wish..
by staying the same old way.. i know.. its lame & bitch.
Its a shame I dont switch.. to different mind frame & twist..
my fate so it exists on the same plane as say.. a Jay & Kiss.

sorta sad though man. It seems like the final chapter of a book
and with your writing skills there is no reason you shouldn't be
an extemely dope audio. I mean flow wise and rhyme scheme
you could be great. But you know how life is... everything takes
time and money. And when you grow up, as we did, lol... you start
needing more of time and money as they begin to flee. Let me know
what's up with the audio.

[Keyser]

This was real nice, i thought your flow was really good and the use of multies also really helped, i love your rhyme scheme though, at times just simple but still effective and then more complex but still so true.

Reassured by a meer.. compliment or vote of confidence...
or by a quote from a domininant poster with prominence

^that was really good.

You had some good imagery aswell and although i thought this might be played like ones before you really did a good job and its great reading. But on a whole this is a good good piece, i've seen better imagery and emotion in OM but never the less, yours was still good throughout, your a great writer with awesome flow dude, do something about it.

Keep up the good work.

[Evolve]

Thanks MM.. I feel you. Time & Money is exactly right.

[Nostradomus.]

Reassured by a meer.. compliment or vote of confidence...
or by a quote from a domininant poster with prominence.
Some kept me closer to dropping shit as i chose not to quit.
Others exposed sloppyness in my prose to stop me a bit.
Got me to just.. not to copy shit & find my own style.
So in the mean while, it seems i'll just compile pieces
that aren't Forever Ill & will forever be decent
See, even recently i've written poorly more frequently
and have yet to stream my voice on any known frequency.

Fucking Evolve man, I read this shit so fast, I had to read it once more. It sounded like you wanted to get back at someone, or maybe you just wanted to shake off the rust. Who knows?, but all I know, is that this peice came out dope as fuck. I enjoyed the vocab you added in here, some were a little forced, but most were well put. Keep 'shaking off the rust' Ev lol, nice job. Feel free to hit the links in my sig man, pz.

[Evolve]

Thanks Nos.... much appreciated fam.

[Evolve]

Dont want this to slip into the abyss of meaningless shit

[Evolve]

Holla!!

[Illus']

Nice. piece


I like your use of multies and vocab..
Kina consistent through out wich is good.
Nice subject matter and you attack it very well.
Nice emotions anger little bit I sensed.


"Through..
out my time on the net i've gotten & given respect.
But i've come to accept that my position is less..
than those who let all of thier ambitions progress.
Consequently, i guess.. my admission is this...
I'm on a road to nowhere.. YES.. ignorance is bliss.
Still, im vigorously pissed fame is igg'n me. Dissed..
by same game i've meticuously aimed at & missed."


Nice lines...emotional wise and stuff.
Nice flow those were your strongest lines.

Overall good stuff stay writing.

Only critique is try and use your vocab
wording in better position so it stays
rhetorically smooooth. feel me ?

[Evolve]

Thanks man.. Much appreciated

[Evolve]

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[Evolve]

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