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Thread: -.Wealth.- (Feat. Bobericc_Lyrics)

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    -.Wealth.- (Feat. Bobericc_Lyrics)

    -.Wealth.-
    .
    .
    If i could ask one thing granted to my life...not much
    I've had the lust of cash, a wifey, but still missing a touch
    What? yet the profound nouns of verbs to bacc ads, BOBjectives
    Dont describe, i still rule mics wit steel breath and rob lectures
    I ruled the stoccs, tryampht over war wit thousands too many
    Hit writers blocc, still took out vets...and remain taking plenty
    Had falls, w/ points to W'z on a slope of votes, thatz not honest
    Better believe its sin...a moccary toast, tip glasses to harnest
    My lifes sentence aint going on anymore... like no coma's
    I've failed trusting many whorez, tube babies born w/ no momma
    If u've seen it, believe it, except everyone tells bigga fishes
    No one shines more than another, we all start out dirty dishes

    .
    .
    Golden Dreams wash away the pain inside my sorry hide,
    I'll never forget the day that I'd always hurt on the inside,
    I've cried rivers, I've seen a lot of dirt dug and undug,
    But it's me who decides to just rub it back into the rug

    .
    .
    Computer plugs, lunged lifes into the cords... its blinding
    Especially when timing can bury me and suspect sum...
    ...District court decision: it aint legally binding...
    To get where you are, at one point u started climbing
    And in order to rap, at one point you had weak rhyming
    Still failing to obtain many inexpieriances...ive had enough
    Until now, ive been clouded, a dilerious kid, but neva bluffed
    Diafram is clutched in, pain stings more a wasps sting
    Lungs rolled up, lika rim, but ill remember glory of my broken wings
    Sharded thoughts in a shadow it once was, glass pulses to a
    ...Broken dream...
    In and out conscienceness, an endless doorway it seems,
    Boxed in a new self, map'n out most niggaz, wit out da key
    Love speakin my mind, turnin getting "banned" into a wedding ring
    Cant hold on, had my life loved and hated, by all thoughts its fated
    Alive but the coughin is temporary, until im cremated
    Between 4 walls and dirt... show respect, cuz may he rise again
    Yall most game, pumpin three holes on da ball & suddenly pinned, ten?
    Been around the globe and dun seen a caged bird heavenly sing
    It wouldnt be a touch to my life at all, with everything

    .
    .
    ...Everything, just seems so unjust, people deprived of trust,
    Life lived for lust not love. Looking above for me becomes a must,
    I've been everywhere, seen everything...understand me now,
    As I kick this off with a poor mans life, now lemme show ya how

    .
    .
    ..Corrupted by diamonds, gold, and chains with the bling,
    While my life is more worthless than a goddamn pinky ring,
    So I begin' to sing my way to the top, try and try I fail,
    Chances of me not being poor is like drinkin the holy grail,
    Ginger Ale tastes better than my life, pain I don't miss...
    ...But I love my wife, so I sing it a little more like this*
    .
    .
    ...Lovely so lovely, trust in me tonight...sing the song,
    As I show you that I don't make good money but do no wrong,
    Life seems unrighteous and so very long, but imagine...
    ...Imagine a world of no money, lust, or beauty pagents.

    .
    .
    Imagine this = harmony without heartbreak, it's just bliss,
    But as I remain poor, I think only of her light touchin kiss,
    Yet I can't even take a piss. What has happened to me?
    ..Why do I think so cheerfully, so poor but yet so happy,
    My credit is six feet under, watch me fall and plunder...
    But then be amazed in wonder, and you know I love her,
    Why's the rich man so unhappy? Well he has no true love,
    And that fuckin' success is the only time he looks above,
    .
    .
    Taking rations under my belt. Hear stories the poor telt,
    Then listen to fabrics of information, know what you felt,
    World where dealers are dealt what they deserve forever,
    Aware of where the tear in the paper becomes so clever

    .
    .
    Poor, never conscious of the mean rich bitches around...
    But if they died into an underground, there'd be no sound,
    My mind is jumpy, comparisons between wifes and the ice,
    I wouldn't change it for the world, world of men and mice,
    I'm so full of life, crowds hate me...but I am loved by she,
    If loving is the enemy, you'd better charge a finders fee,
    Like new three ringed binders, won't get nuthin outta me-
    And I'm so poor when it comes to being the oh so wealthy.

    *~Big Nash~* - Normal & Slate Gray
    Bobericc_Lyrics - Bold Writing


    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260324
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    ~beautiful~

    1st post
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    omfg
    big nash i wanna do a colab with you
    im worth god dammit

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    one OM i checced
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261665

    ^^^thinkin he shud be banned lolz, ill checc another, or big nash will drop one
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    Don't you love how my little choruses flow in and off every verse there...especially that first one lol. This took a lot of effort and time...a whole like hour and a half, better be greatful Bob!...lol, good verse. My Favorite lines were these ones:

    My lifes sentence aint going on anymore... like no coma's
    I've failed trusting many whorez, tube babies born w/ no momma
    ^That had a dope metaphor on the first line...

    Cant hold on, had my life loved and hated, by all thoughts its fated
    Alive but the coughin is temporary, until im cremated
    ^Loved how Coughin had two meanings there...

    By far on of my best collabs, good verse...happy doing work with ya,

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    im still reading urs....ill tell u what i liked son, YES IM GREATFUL...lol... :P...gimme two min...one my best collabs i had done
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    Golden Dreams wash away the pain inside my sorry hide,
    I'll never forget the day that I'd always hurt on the inside,
    I've cried rivers, I've seen a lot of dirt dug and undug,
    But it's me who decides to just rub it back into the rug
    ^^^
    sum how, this jus covered a beautiful point... the concepts of my first verse brought to the brim of its height feel me?....i thought this set of lines stucc out more then the rest a more insight poetical feeling that gave sum chyllz down my spine
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    Don't Sleep kids...it's a long read yes, but recognize it at least.

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    lol^^
    As like always a great peice from nash.
    Bob you were ok nice wordplay, all though flow could be better yo.

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    yep, recognize dis 1
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    yes this was a very nice read liked the eforrt both you guys put into it havent reallyread any of the things you guys have done but this was good no joke liking the metas and the emotion but into this good job guys and nice flow

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    Another collab without me Ohh well.But this was a good piece from yall.Yall had real good Imagry and emotion in yalls piece.Also you had a good opener and closer to the piece which is good too.But there were some lines that were stretch and that could be Improved.Yall structure was good and your vocabulary was good.Keep up the good work.*leaves the thread upset cuz big nash don't want to do a collab with va*

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    ^Thanks For feed Tim, good to know you're lookin' our way. And Vafinest...I've told you before, send me a topic and a piece you've written and I'll have it done in a day or 2...Depending on how bussy I am, Not sure you'll see this but I'll PM it to you...Peace,

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    this was a very nice peice
    structure/flow were smooth
    i liked that i didnt feel like fallin asleep after reading half of it
    it kept me wanting more lol
    i like the concept
    it was dope
    vocab was good
    imaginary was dope
    overall this was a hot peice
    cant wate for are collab

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