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Thread: Pain Confirms Existence

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    2 Time ABL Champ K-JaBz's Avatar
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    Pain Confirms Existence

    Pain confirms existence


    The drama I seen is uncanny//
    The only love I felt from’s the streetz, fuck a family//
    But I still got love for my granny//
    She can’t hear me, she died before the towers fell//
    September the 10th//
    I cried hot tears of pain, and simmered in it//
    Why the fuck you think I hate//
    Cause love never faithful//
    It’s shameful, the way endulge in my sin//
    But I gotta go to war for my kin//
    If I wind up jail, fuck gettin’ the bail//
    Just give my rope for my throat, and big ass chair//
    Don’t even act like ya bitch ass care//
    Da devil talk to me, why don’t god?//
    Da devil walk wit me, just watch me fall//
    Matter fact he probably trip me//
    But I don’t want ya pity//
    I’m filled up with rage, that’s enough to level city’s//
    And I don’t make music for ya’ll//
    I make music for war//
    Kick rhymes til I’m bruisin’ the song//
    I metamorphed into another guy//
    Somethin’ like a butterfly//
    Right before my eyes, I watched my own grandmother die//
    And Niggaz I grew up wit’, are long dead//
    I sit back in my zone, I guess I’m up next//
    I presume spit doom in the booth//
    My reality is flawed, I’m confused by the truth//
    But I still suit up wit’ my troops//
    My sister’s on section aid//
    My niece is in the second grade//
    My nephew goin’ bout school wrong//
    Money’s tight, and my sis just had a new-born//
    The father’s in and out of jail, what the hell’s goin’ on?//
    And about to get evicted, one case got aquitted//
    But I still another one pendin’//
    I believe in god, but don’t believe that he cares//
    Look at how his people suffer, don’t you see it ain’t fair?//
    I been shackled and beatin’, hastled for breathin’//
    Cop fucked me up, his partner acted like he ain’t see it//
    And the only thing equal, in a world full of people//
    Is the hate that we have, it’s goin’ never be peaceful//


    My first OM.

    I have it recorded as well.


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261360

    ^^U can check audio out there

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    you need to leave 2 links to oms you have left decent feed on or this will be closed

    just givin' you the heads up

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    flow was cool on the audio... multies were needed, structure was wack, get rid off the "//", it makes it lok noobish, vocab aws cool, i guess, and the flow was nice, overalll good piece stay up jabz

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