my bad. got caught up im the moment of debate
my full apoligies to Bounce and what he is trying to accomplish in this forum
my bad. got caught up im the moment of debate
my full apoligies to Bounce and what he is trying to accomplish in this forum
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nice peice lil long but i read the thing an it was aight
this was a pretty sic shit i like deception and asssassins verse best keeep tht shit up aiight 1
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I think this was a nice collab...everyone brought there own words as ta wat they feel is a legend... o dudes verse about who he thinks r hip hop legends was a good mix..yall got it in audio tho?
Get At Me....
wordOriginally Posted by Bounce
Bounce is right
this piece wsnt to gd
flowd a bit
rhymed alrite, but a bit simple
alrite structure
Bounce does giv gd feed, most the time, which is why ppl dont say shit
Opinions r like assholes, everyones got one and they stink
Thankx for the feed.
Rise!
thanks for the feedback. uppin dis thread.
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word homes thanks for the FEED...........................
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
deception - most of your shit didint really rhyme... try and do that next tiome...
spul - lines were very stretched..... if you have shit that stretched throw multies in it
assassin - vocabulry was very simple, up it and try to throw in multies to make the flow smoother
sinner- couldnt catch the rhyme schceme..... it was okay, try to make more words rhyme next time
gs - better flow good multies, and vocab was much better... nest verse of the thing...
peep "just like dady"
^^^str8 thanks for the FEED homes............................will do.
ill leave feed on the perfect world. or i did already.
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
peep "just like daddy" or "dear america"
yea peeped just like DADDY..........................
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
iight, this was a long ass om but, I cant talk. One of my oms are the same. But anyways. This was an alright piece, not the best, but it was cool. The first verse kinda threw me off since it did not rhyme much, but the word play kept me going. The rest of the verses were straight, some a bit stretched but you continued to make up for it. You still need to elevate, but you got potential. Work at it, you'll see how things come out.
Return the favor, it owuld be appreciated....Lawless Streets and Lawless Streets 2 need some love lol.
-Withersman
RIP MANET
OPEN MICS
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tight motha fuckin collab, i like this shit, it showed all the aspects i was looking for, vocab, wordplay, structure, and creativity, you guys hit it on the mark with this one. stay up
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Im that supernova Recruit Troopa Soulja,
Takin out Brutes as Huge as Boulders
Word^^Thanks, for those who thought it didnt rhyme are just not saying it out loud properly..oh well, uppin.
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