Red

[Code Red]

RED is the color of the flag that I got
RED is the color of the fluid I let drop
RED is wut u leave on ya porch after war
RED is the color of the X god put on ya door
RED is the color of the cross that saves lives
RED is the color that The Game got shot for
RED is the color that disseased for Big's life cord
RED is a sign of someone that endangers live
RED my be the color that actually means death
RED is wut ya see when fire burn all that's left
RED is not a very smart color to wear in some part
RED my be the color that gets to stop ya heart
RED is the thing that keeps us all alive
RED is wut has us on the line of livin or strive
RED can be the color of a very beautiful flower
RED can be the color pour down ya shower
RED is wut ya see when ya pop that cherry
RED not a joyful color may be scary
RED my be the color of the lipstick ya wife wears
RED can also mean caution if u dare
RED is a warning color to look out for always
RED is the same color of Santa's suit on snowday
RED is a color that means u r in danger
RED can be the color that save ya from danger
RED is lively color that is lively just like a heart
RED can be the color of the thing that tears ya apart
RED is the color of demons and evil
RED is the color of Satin aka the devil
RED is the colorn of a stop sign
RED is the color of of my rythmes
RED is the color of the beams from the sniper
RED is the color that shed and made me a lifer
RED is the color of the ER sign in the hospital
RED is wut shed on my block for a dime or a nickel
RED mean that u not in a real top shape condition
RED mean that ya in a gun to ya back position
RED is the wut I shed and put in jail for
RED is the color that I bled on my door
RED is the color I see on my head
RED flames is wut I see in HELL'S BED

[Code Red]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...94#post3713394
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3713407

[Percept]

dope conept... try re editing it for better vocab and flow... that'd make it hot

hit up one of the links in my sig... under library

[Code Red]

Thanx

[Straight Ridah.]

Yeah the concept of this piece was fresh flow was good and konsistant throughout your whole verse and evrything else was decent good piece overall i liked it alot

[Gifted Signs]

I like your concept of it but the verse seemed to simple and not that much feeling like most OMs I seen better stuff from you but i ain't bad

[.:test:.]

i thought it was dope nice lookin homie keep it up

[Code Red]

Thanx

[big j da fat boy]

nice peice good flow an keep at it dawg

[[S]uB-[L]yrikaL]

sum parts i like sum parts not so much... overall i think red is dead n u killed it..lol naw juss fukin with ya...but red is a good tho

[Pedantic.]

Yeah the concept of this piece was fresh flow was good and consistant throughout your verse and evrything else was decent good piece overall i liked it even though.....ii dont cop signz or throw flagz

[Solido]

yh ya concept was gd. try 2 improve vocab. keep at it and try 2 elevate aswell 2 get betta

[<Supreme>]

didnt like this drop man
improve ur rhymin and vocab
gd structure
alrite flow
elevate rhymin n vocab
borin piece
RED
RED
RED
there is other words, or u cud of put it in different places on the lines (middle, end, etc)
elevate n keep tryin

no h8

[Code Red]

^^^^^^^It's a quick drop fool I just did it

[<Supreme>]

i do quick drops most tha time
but i use more thn 1 word

so FUCK U
elevate

i said no h8...but if u cant take my opinion get yo ass off the site, cus other ppl will think the same