Dear Brother.

[evil king]

I'm locked up and I know it's hard to get in contact with one another.
then I call u for christmas n we have nothing 2 say 2 each-other.
we're seprated and its killing me to wait for you 2 become a man.
only if I could tell you my pain only if you could just understand.
for us to be together for ever I wish there was something I can do.
mom said you wanted 2 be like me heard you even started rappin to.
brother Its you and you only that I wanna hold on hug and kiss.
and its hard for me too know that your growing up without my exsist.
for you I'll take a bullet a stab for you I'll give away all my health.
when I look in your eyes I cry cause I just see nothing but my self.
all this shit thats happening to us is nothing but saddnes and cruel.
made high honoroll I heard your a talented student in school.
I will swallow my pride for you your my key to life like my mother.
and when I die I want you not to forget the love we had for eachother.
when your down I will always be your cruch call me your utencil.
and now that we're apart our connection fades like erasers on pencils.
love hurts so what I'm trying to say to you may be painfull.
but I am your protection in life I am your second guardian angel.


Can't write anymore gettin to emotional

[Sin_tha_truth]

THat was real good man i really felt that, yo im starting to build a label u should get at me sometime, i reaaly like what u wrote, MjM2trey@aol.com

[evil king]

thanks more feed

[word slinga]

yeah that was dope son keep it up...liked how it all flowed together like a story

[evil king]

thanks uppin.

[EyeBite]

This Was A Good Drop...The Topic Was Interesting And I Was Feelin It..Flow Was Very Smooth And Structure Was Like Perfect....Rhymes Were Good And Complex..You Had A Few Great Multies....Overall This Drop Was Very Goood...Keep It Up.....Peace..

[Issue]

This was emotional man, it was sincerely emotional to you, it maybe doesnt show to other people but I see where your coming from. I think the emotion you created here was as much as your talent could show, Im sorry but right now you need to elevate. Some lines weren't that strong, it had a hella lot of feeling, some nice little wordplay here and there, but overall Id like to see you keep writing and tackle this subject when you've reached your potential.

Stay up man, peace.

Anna Maria

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[Spakz]

Wow No Offence or nothen but when i read your peice i felt that you and him was having somthen going on.I Felt the Emotional Part of this but after the first 4 Bars i Seen 2 Parts to what you was saying.But Ay It was Still Some Good Shit Stay Up keep Writen 1
-That Poetry Kid,Spakz

[Issue]

Wow No Offence or nothen but when i read your peice i felt that you and him was having somthen going on.

Kid, stop acting your age. Grow the fuck up. Thank you.

Upp'n this for Evil King?!

[tipz]

yo i'm tell da truth,that shit was ass,if u want da beef, i'm on top of it like at A1 sauce

[evil king]

uppin.

[Issue]

u really search and upp after 3 weeks?

[spitz_shine]

yea this shit had everything basicly...
good flow
nice multies...
i enjoyed it
good topic to..i could invision what u was saying in this
good drop