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Thread: Backstabber

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    Backstabber

    [Announcer] “There is a man on the loose, repeat, there is a man on the loose…he’s armed with a knife…watch your backs”

    Someone’s jus broke out, he’s on the loose
    Some stabber, he won’t call a truce
    He used to be your best friend, till he sold your raps
    Now the police telling you to guard your backs
    There’s a wack rapper, a back stabber
    On the run, he sounds much crapper
    Than Fred Durst and Everlast together
    On a track called lovin Whitey for ever
    But back to the criminal mastermind
    He ain’t strong enough to last the time
    To escape the police search around the streets
    Loses games, nicks stuff, he was playin for keeps
    And he lost, and now the police have lost him
    They lookin in Queens while he’s in Boston
    I’m goin out to find him, drop some rhymes to blind him
    Then take him into the police, so I gotta occupy him
    Keep him concentratin enough so they can trial him
    So I’m lookin round the streets where he was playin for keeps
    See his footprints, and follow them to an alleyway
    But there’s nothing there, he must’ve got away
    I hear a voice behind me; feel a pain in my back
    It’s the backstabber, he stabbed me, I’m dyin…crap

    [Announcer] “He has been seen, he is powerful with your backs turned…he is in Boston…if he threatens Benzino…don’t worry…that’s normal behaviour…watch your backs
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    links r in my sig
    leave links and ill comment/vote on ur battles/drops

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    nice work. i enjoyed that one. Will you hear my first audio freestyle? its not great, but it was 4 in the morning.

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    thats was funny u always dissen benzino and Durst ur shit is fun to read

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    I thought eminems version of a backstabber was better personally. but still this was a good read. the flow seemed to be a little off, and the multis were seeming like they were TRYING to be used but just were never thrown in. the structure was even for the most part. The overall piece was..Meh, i guess haha. Keep droppin, constructin topics, and just keep it raw.

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    thnx for the feed...i was tryin my best to not bit from backstabber - but if i ever do Biterphobia...

    not my usual style of om

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    hey diss was a pretty good drop homie..topic was interesting and the rhymes you had were good same with the good multies.....flow was smooth all through and even struuctre as well.....vocab was ok....imagery was iight.....ovwerall this was good...keep it up..peace

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    FRESH bro

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    thnx for the feed

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    uppin

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    kinda basic....u coulda stretch the bars a lil...ya flow was choppy on some points...but this was well thought out an done..painted da image well...storyline board kinda feel..hit us up with some mutlis
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    that drop is good its funny wiv dissin the limp biscuit arshole fred durst and takin a punch benzino asweel. the flow was very good and it was easy 2 understand the topic u ad chosen in the drop. the drop is awesome. keep@it

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    muthafucka benzino
    fuck biscuit [bizkit]
    im barely dissin them

    thnx for the feed yall

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    benzino and biscuit were born 2 waste ppl time and try 2 fuck their heads up wiv ya shit. no probs inst1gator

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    i wasnt really feeling this peace it could of been better if you used some multies and a better structure topic was played but other than that it was ight

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