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Thread: More Pain, Better Days

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    More Pain, Better Days

    More Pain, Better Days
    got a stone of heart, i aint been loved enuff
    though this road get harder gotta stay strong n strut
    cause more pain lead to better days in the future for us
    wen i listen to "tribute to a woman" its like i told Gin wats up
    fake niggas is chumps so i treat dem like da bitch dey are
    thinkin dat steel scare me i dont fear nuthin but God
    but dat steel make u feel big, u still get shot up like 50
    sleepin under the grass n dirt like da groundhogs pussy
    and ma, i kno u fed up, this aint the route u chose
    got a sister dat stay on ya ass like panties, why she treat u so cold
    maybe cause your young and she think its the only way to teach u
    im tellin u i feel ya pain, take in every bar i spit at u
    wen i was ur age didnt have a clue i'd turn out this way
    didnt even intend on lovin the dips and spittin today
    like juelz sed too, flippin pages dont change the page
    ma fuck runnin from it cause it just leads to more pain

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    gd drop
    rhymin bit simple
    flowd well
    gd struture
    overall gd piece - 7/10

    keep @ it

    can u comment on sum of my open mics in first page of forum

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    i liked it. u have an awesome flow. nice piece to read.

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    uppin for more feed............

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    That was nice shit keep that shit goin.I always like your shit,its good 2 read
    Thiocfaidh Ár Lá

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    rymes was simple structure was good and i liked the way u wraped it together at the end nice drop
    leave feed on my om what happens next

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