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  1. December 14th, 2005, 05:36 AM #1
    MADDUS
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    Suicide Bomber

    the (brackets) are spit as backup voices
    continue flow str8 after
    if you see...three dots...
    that means there is very brief pause
    if -you-see-a-dash-it-flows-on
    this structure is how i spit it, best i can explain



    yo what a tragedy apparently my life is a misery
    so the rebel academy wants to use my analogy on
    (RAP ANARCHY)
    catorgry depicts my mentality on reality...
    politicians pleadin insanity yo they( MAD AT ME)
    governments...
    all wanna battle me-cos im crackin the shackles gee-
    when attackin the faculty they aint trackin me
    (ANATOMY)
    hidden irraticly-when im spittin sparaticly-
    use a mic like a gattaling
    ( YO YOU HEARD A ME)
    come across invite you to murder me...
    burn me in effigy...
    dont care if you hurtn me...
    (BY ANY MEANS)
    enemy gon feel all my energy-from my birth to the cemetry-
    recogniz'n my pedigree
    yo my terrors (RAW)
    and im’a die for the cause
    so you can step into the light and recieve the (RAP...LORD)
    to all my soildiers sik a bein ignored...
    well you can follow me (POTNA) im goin to war-
    im bout to...
    cause some disorder amongst the law and the order-
    because they...
    crossin the border over land and the water-
    my temper...
    shorter than all da morters hitten supporters-
    of fallen...
    causes recorded by Osama reporters
    they got me...
    they gotme thinkin-thinkin back to the days-
    ancient warrior waysss
    am i just a slave to the pain
    FUCK DISS SHIT IM'A PLAY!
    IM'A PUT YOUR KIDS ON DISPLAY!
    IM'A FIND THE INNOCENT
    AND INTRODUCE A GRENADE!
    aint no need for a truce!
    fuk'a when i die i recruit!
    aint got nutt'n to lose!
    tell me when you walk in my shoes!
    theyll remember my name!
    (MADDUS)-blowin up in the game...
    SUICIDE BOMB the whole site on his very first day!!!



    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...63#post3604963
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post3604973
    Last edited by MADDUS; December 17th, 2005 at 07:56 AM Reason: STRUCTURE
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  2. December 14th, 2005, 05:56 AM #2
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    Its coo it got a lil hard to read in some spots i like tha vocab and metaphors you use in this piece overall 7/10 keep it up homie
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  3. December 14th, 2005, 06:42 AM #3
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    I like it, hard punches in their, and some good flow, i was diggin it, keep it up Maddus
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  4. December 14th, 2005, 06:49 AM #4
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    Good flow dude, i was feelin it cuz i feel that this whole issue is extremely relevant, especially to our generation. Good to see someone aint slept on it...good job

    8/10

    ~1~
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  5. December 14th, 2005, 06:53 AM #5
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    that was aiight, i was feelin it... was pretty good structure, and this was a lil different technique. was on point tha whole way and tha flow was gr8. Kept me readin this coz no parts were so much better then the other, they was all aiight and well written. keep droppin
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  6. December 14th, 2005, 09:29 AM #6
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    gud looks for da feed, i checked all of ya styles and gave feed,
    yall got some hotness...peace

    upppin for feed
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  7. December 14th, 2005, 12:16 PM #7
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  8. December 15th, 2005, 12:02 PM #8
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  9. December 15th, 2005, 07:20 PM #9
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    Uppin Fa Feed, Much Appreciated
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  10. December 15th, 2005, 10:34 PM #10
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    uppin fa feed, much appreciated
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  11. December 16th, 2005, 05:26 AM #11
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    damm can i get some feed, dont sleep peeps
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  12. December 16th, 2005, 09:04 AM #12
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    Yeah, that shit was hot. I liked your flow and your content, i could feel the anger, it was wicked mate. Keep it coming! Big up yourself blood
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  13. December 17th, 2005, 12:08 AM #13
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    good looks dusty...i replied to ya piece

    i will reply to any one who gives feed peace
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  14. December 17th, 2005, 01:12 AM #14
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    hidden irraticly
    when im spittin sparaticly,
    use a mic like a gattaling


    that shit was dope yo, keep spititn

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    Im that supernova Recruit Troopa Soulja,
    Takin out Brutes as Huge as Boulders
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  15. December 17th, 2005, 03:50 AM #15
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    good looks for da feed diamond...i replied to your piece

    give feed to my piece i will difinitely reply to yours...much appreciated
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