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    Mathematical Destruction

    My Flow Is Unimaginable
    I Guess It's What You Call Incalculable
    Destroying MC's With Mathematical
    Terms That Bring Confusion To The Brain
    Because This Type Of Math Is The Kind That Inflicts Pain
    Somethin To Make You Go Insane
    Nothin To Laugh At
    Just These Insane Lyrics And Trizapazoids
    Bringin Tension To Your Eardrums
    Like The Intense Variables That Come Out Of This MC's Voice
    I Guess You Could Say I Have The Serum
    Like Pythagorean Theorem
    A Squared Plus B Squared Equals C Squared
    Leave Your Vision Impared
    The Next Thing You Know Your Feelin Scared
    What My Next Spit Just Might Be
    But Dont Feel Strange
    It All Make You Feel Deranged
    All These Variables, Numbers And Formulas Runnin Through Your Brain
    So Let Me Leave You With These Words That Will Make You A Little Insane
    Im Not Askin You To Envy Me, Just Remember The Name
    And How You Got Ripped By A Punk From The Twelvth Grade

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    Im lookin for some feedback, this is my 4th ever freestyle.

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    you need elevatoin alot, work on your wording, and your imagry yo, and work on your creativty..

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    That shit was like...Revenge of the Nerds or some shit. I agree, you need to work on your rhyme scheme and your general structure. If i need to do some trig i'll come to u tho dude

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    Haha, actually I failed math this semester. But, yeah thanks for the feedback. I just thought Itd be a different topic.

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    StRiNgThEoRy
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    It was different tho, i'll give you that. It's a change from all that 'gats and clips' shit, ya know?....

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