Demon Pyrokronix (1-0) vs Nib Oswald (1-0)

[KempoMRK]

I don't spit with fresh breath, but my death threats will turn you to mince
Since D's a pounce, I stamped his face and left it covered with Prince

Weak, didn't hit at all.

Hint Pyro wins? Get ripped to bits- guys, don't try jumpin' the shark
This powerless coward's fightin' fire with jumper-lead sparks

Nah, too weird to work.

Teachin this bitch new tricks of linguistics is no easy stunt
A chap who aint received a 'clap', but he's still one 'cheesy cunt'

Nah.

You can see men hire colonics off Dame Demon Pyrokronix
Claims he's had a gutful of me... my semen lines his stomach

Don't use cum lines, they are so played.

Demon's too drunk off his 'drops' that 'plonk' to flow when he's sober
Here's me at the bottom of the hill- with D going over

Pretty weak.

Hoover and Paris Hilton must sponsour him to suck 'n' blow
Not since Bad Santa have I heard such a motherfuckin' ho

Ok, but wording would have improved it.

An anagram of his name reveals what he's wantin' for kicks
The twisted prick spends weekends huntin' for MONKEY-PORN-OR-DIX.

This was creative as fuck, nice bar.


I slice jews, fight fools and I'm dope when I write too
^Proves that ANYONE can write wack ass multies JUST LIKE you

Nice, this hit well.

Kids a fag, and long since his sex life derailed
But if we removed the middle man Nib'd finally fuck a female

Wasn't feeling.

Yeah you're reppin IJL, shit ain't gonna trouble me see
Coz I ain't seen such a wack roster since The Rock and Golberg left WE

Nor this, I think it praps coulda been worded better also.

Fuck are you buryin me, kid you're just postin bull
Coz you're like the ONLY dude in this league who's NEVER had a quotable

Didn't like this much, too simple.

IJL? Maybe you think they're dope, but I guess that's natural
But even Tom could see that Cruise more overated than he was in Collateral

That's nice, cool bar.

You're a fuckin disgrace, now watch as I drown you in ointment
Coz you drop so much garbage you'll raise street cleaner employment

Nah, played concept.

So here's one final fuck you kid, I've no time for bastards
But it's obvious where Nib's work goes - just read his name backwards

Nice bar, liked this.


Demon took this easy, he had 3 quotables and they were all pretty good. Nib only had one which was the last bar due to its creativity. So yeah, Demon took this pretty easily.

v/ Demon

[Nib Oswald]

I second my initial 'Ow'.

...Ow.

I know the semen line is played, but I thought that having such a difficult multi-rhyme for 'Demon Pyrokronix' would've made up for it. Anyhoo, I didn't expect to have a chance in this one. Most of your stuff was rubbish, DP, but I liked your 'bin lining'.

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Lol at hardly anyone getting my middle man punch...

And fuck off Nib, you suck so don't say my verse was garbage. I had 3 quotables, the closest thing you'll ever get to a quotable is the quotation marks around your wordplay.

[Ruthless.]

v/demon. will explain in mag.

[Lyrical God]

Lol at hardly anyone getting my middle man punch...

And fuck off Nib, you suck so don't say my verse was garbage. I had 3 quotables, the closest thing you'll ever get to a quotable is the quotation marks aroud your wordplay.

lol

[The sickone]

So here's one final fuck you kid, I've no time for bastards
But it's obvious where Nib's work goes - just read his name backwards

vs.

nothing..

this battle was like one sided..the other dude ant come hard..
v/demon

[Untold.]

You can see men hire colonics off Dame Demon Pyrokronix
Claims he's had a gutful of me... my semen lines his stomach
Hoover and Paris Hilton must sponsour him to suck 'n' blow
Not since Bad Santa have I heard such a motherfuckin' ho

vs.

I slice jews, fight fools and I'm dope when I write too
^Proves that ANYONE can write wack ass multies JUST LIKE you
Kids a fag, and long since his sex life derailed
But if we removed the middle man Nib'd finally fuck a female
You're a fuckin disgrace, now watch as I drown you in ointment
Coz you drop so much garbage you'll raise street cleaner employment
So here's one final fuck you kid, I've no time for bastards
But it's obvious where Nib's work goes - just read his name backwards

ok. this was pretty easy for me. nib, you just had an aiight verse. you should work on the wording of things and how to throw a good punch. and work on the wordplay a bit. but an aiight verse on your part. as for demon, good, solid punches and witty concepts. good verse overall and that "bin" line was illy.

v/ demon

[Nib Oswald]

Lol at hardly anyone getting my middle man punch...

And fuck off Nib, you suck so don't say my verse was garbage. I had 3 quotables, the closest thing you'll ever get to a quotable is the quotation marks around your wordplay.

Hey! I was joking, I was keeding! Lighten up, I've just said how I knew your stuff would've been better than mine.

This powerless coward's fightin' fire with jumper-lead sparks
If you had reworded to be more like "he's the type to put out fire with... or like the last time he put out fire he... " make it in the form of a punch

It was in the form of a punch. Instead of fighting fire with fire, he's fighting fire with sparks. So it inferred that he was battling my material with inferior material, if ya getsa my drift.

Hoover and Paris Hilton must sponsour him to suck 'n' blow
Not since Bad Santa have I heard such a motherfuckin' ho
actually not a bad concept of Bad Santa, but coulda done more with it

Um, like fucking WHAT?

[Tony Brown]

Hoover and Paris Hilton must sponsour him to suck 'n' blow
Not since Bad Santa have I heard such a motherfuckin' ho

should have been worded differently, i BARELY quoted this

vs

I slice jews, fight fools and I'm dope when I write too
^Proves that ANYONE can write wack ass multies JUST LIKE you
Kids a fag, and long since his sex life derailed
But if we removed the middle man Nib'd finally fuck a female
Fuck are you buryin me, kid you're just postin bull
Coz you're like the ONLY dude in this league who's NEVER had a quotable
So here's one final fuck you kid, I've no time for bastards
But it's obvious where Nib's work goes - just read his name backwards
^^^^hmmm........somewhere in the top 10

v/ demon

[M.O.U.S.E.]

An anagram of his name reveals what he's wantin' for kicks
The twisted prick spends weekends huntin' for MONKEY-PORN-OR-DIX.

vs.

I slice jews, fight fools and I'm dope when I write too
^Proves that ANYONE can write wack ass multies JUST LIKE you
IJL? Maybe you think they're dope, but I guess that's natural
But even Tom could see that Cruise more overated than he was in Collateral
So here's one final fuck you kid, I've no time for bastards
But it's obvious where Nib's work goes - just read his name backwards

Nib- I just wasnt feelin ya verse all that much...... monkey-porn-or-diX was creative but thats all i saw really.....ur punches really didnt take any affect in this match....be more witty.....

Demon- Thought you took it hands down foreal.....Simple and two the point.... opener had me rollin....came out hard wit the facts......slayed oppenent....i cant say much more foreal....overal good simple and straight to the point verse...

v/demon

[Aines]

Demon wins and signs out 2-0

Nib oswald (1-1)