v/ thor..
v/ thor..
My Drift, the mixtape coming this summer be on the look out shit is HOT
V/thor
for coming better
punches hit & personals
good shit thor, ant work on ya shit
is that it
8-0
Dam, y'all dropped early
AB
Thor aint religious, baptizing words? they get boo dissed
Would tell ya to stick thread up ur ass,
....................But ya girlfriend's G String beat me to it
You had a lot of punches that were very close to being quotable, but they were killed by the wording. I was very impressed by your verse overall though and I think you'll go far in this just word your punches right because there not hitting how you want them to.
Vs.
Thor
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
Again you came very fresh with the concepts man. Most of your punches hit hard and were very witty. As long as you dont get burnt with concepts which I doubt will happen you should go far in this. You've been very consistent man, keep it up.
v//Thor
<<The real Renegade
Thanks for all the feedback...
Finally, I'm losing by fair votes.. I aint never going back to the FL...
Uppn for anymore feedback
ima whore ya so badly, ull come up short, you aren't tight
this would be 1 hell a' ride,....
...but u dont meet the required height
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
^im tired of you flipping the right hand line
vs
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown
well nothen thats dope i see but thor came more consistant in this battle and antonio just lost it and came back at the end
v/thor
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown
vs
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
not a bad battle, but thor had better verse overall, cuz i can't say he was actually better
V/thor
AB:
Sorry man, but you didn't have any quotables.
You did have a potential for an ok punch;
Yeah he's leavin a permanent mark,
.......................even has the ink stains to prove it
^^^ should have changed ink for shit.
Thor:
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
Overall:
Pretty weak match. AB had some ideas but didn't do shit with them.
Thor looked like he quickly keyed a verse, because most of it was
kinda shit. Cept the line I quoted. But he looked like he could
post a little more fire. Not a good battle, nor a really bad one.
Props to both for showing.
Vote:Thor
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Even his notes are off, ur a little flat when ya singin
Been quotin the Renegade so long U even voiced his opinion
Bitchin so much he became one, and bought a teeny purse
Lost by a hair so many times,
.......................Ud think he was waxed by bikini amateurs
vs
ima whore ya so badly, ull come up short, you aren't tight
this would be 1 hell a' ride,....
...but u dont meet the required height
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
dont pull a liar and say i suck, and that im played as shit
or ill leave u hangin on msn when u ask for elivation tips!
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
v/ thor
Antonio:
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown
vs.
Thor:
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
Pretty good battle. Looking foward to some more shit from both of you. Thor just had better concepts and wording. He won this slightly.
V/Thor
14-0
Antonio
Ya crew's face is deformed & hiddeous, see what drugs do?
the vision of Written Warfare must be blurry,
.......................He's hardly seen with back to back Ws
nah...
Thor aint religious, baptizing words? they get boo dissed
Would tell ya to stick thread up ur ass,
....................But ya girlfriend's G String beat me to it
meh...concept was cool. wording fucked it up.
Even his notes are off, ur a little flat when ya singin
Been quotin the Renegade so long U even voiced his opinion
meh, weak personal.
Bitchin so much he became one, and bought a teeny purse
Lost by a hair so many times,
.......................Ud think he was waxed by bikini amateurs
concept was weak, wording didnt help it either.
Ya writtens a jargon, symbolic of Twisted recruitment
Yeah he's leavin a permanent mark,
.......................even has the ink stains to prove it
nah...
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
meh....just meh..
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown
weak closer...
Overall...just not up to parr. You had some good ideas with most of your concepts, but your wording needs work. Didnt really have any flow to your verse when I was reading it out loud. Just work on wording.
Thor
ima whore ya so badly, ull come up short, you aren't tight
this would be 1 hell a' ride,....
...but u dont meet the required height
meh...
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
lol, i liked the wording on this concept
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
meh....kinda weak
dont pull a liar and say i suck, and that im played as shit
or ill leave u hangin on msn when u ask for elivation tips!
personal
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
hair concept is cool, not dope or anything, just cool
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
i liked this. first line connected with he punch. with out it there was no punch. good wording
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
meh....
Overall. You were consistant Thor. I like the way you word your concepts. Good shit nig.
Vote Thor.
Just Better.
Nig.
Crucial Were You Be At damn like you pop up unoccationally anyways yeah my vote said it all
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
vs
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
Banderas change your structure because it just fucks up your punches. I didn't like the milk line at all, the G String line was ok but the wording was wack, the lock punch was cool and with better wording coulda been dope. Thor you came consistent and did enough to win. I really like the fall off line and the cocky line was cool too. I didn't feel the TNL line and the msn personal was ok but woulda been better with wordplay.
V/ Thor
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