O.V.Dose (0-0) vs Symboalus. (0-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 2

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first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

[Mr. Write]

Synthetic drug abusive relationship counseling staff

[Symboalus.]

16 lines foo's.

check.

[Symboalus.]

Ready ta whore O.V.......others viewin this shit? man i gotta toast.
Im feedin him my dopeness in capsles...and it gave em a Over Dose.
He's been here since 03, and like me and Teleported elevators on Sym......
...........................I elevated faster than him.
He's done already, he cries behind his comp and says i dont give a fuck.
If you were the soul of a leppercaun and you departed that means your 'out of luck'.
His note LLL jr pre write note book bruned so he's Out of a Verse, so i give em a dose.
Of a 4 year olds skill at rhyming, mabey this shit will be a little less than close.
Dammit, dont choke, wait lemme do it for you, hay, look he cant swollow his pride.
That aint a hole in ya heart g............thats were my knife resides.
Your in First Class?.....i think a long time ago, some one sufficated and merked that crew.
I think he knows it................thats why he high-lighted it in the color blue.
He pressed reply to topic, not knowing if he should drop.....
He erased it 3 times after he tried to compete, then the pressure made his heart stop.
Ok now, you open yet for the closure of this nightmare, so then you could wake up?
After this week he'l stop pm'in me to give me head...mabey now his mouf will stay shut.

[Symboalus.]

bump for his verse....

[Mr. Write]

All your raps are weak whenever you battle people see fear
You shouldnt be here....
..................your skill jumps down a notch every leap year
He never gets out of the house id say its his greatest weakness
He signed up to get butchered...thinkin he would see some cleavage!!
Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks.....
..................your cock doesnt get the time of day
Tries to convince us hes a nice guy, Stop the rhetoric!
Im not tryin to egg you on....but son youve ALWAYS bennedict
Sym gets pissed when he loses.........I tell ya this kid sucks
After this match your a stranded cannibal........
...............................................you b-eating yourself up
Must be from Beverly Hills...think your smart? you're not very
Havent seen this much miss-spelling since before Tori got married
I'll bury your reputation...when he spells kids are amazed
Only time this fairy ever worked magic he ended up getting AIDS
Sym you'll never win...i bet you wish your predictions count
Bumpin Tupac in your car is the ONLY time you'll get around

[Alphabetized]

hold on...
*gets a magnifying glass to read Symboalus's verse*
K....

Your flow was... well different. I got it though...
I wish your verse was easier to read but u did it so it would all fit.
I think your best qoute was here.

Ok now, you open yet for the closure of this nightmare, so then you could wake up?
After this week he'l stop pm'in me to give me head...mabey now his mouf will stay shut.

Thats good but some of your other lines were more statements than anything
and to me it didn't seem like they were hittin hard. A llittle bit of rewording
and your punches would have come much harder...

VS

My favorite qoutes here were

All your raps are weak whenever you battle people see fear
You shouldnt be here....
..................your skill jumps down a notch every leap year

Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks.....
..................your cock doesnt get the time of day

I'll bury your reputation...when he spells kids are amazed
Only time this fairy ever worked magic he ended up getting AIDS

I think your battle had some more humerous punches.
I liked the structure better and it seemed to flow better.
I also found it more enjoyable and it had more qoutables.

Nothing personal...
but...
v/ O.V.Dose for all reasons above.

[Symboalus.]

dope verse....uppin..

[A. Know-phistage]

All your raps are weak whenever you battle people see fear
You shouldnt be here....
..................your skill jumps down a notch every leap year
He never gets out of the house id say its his greatest weakness
He signed up to get butchered...thinkin he would see some cleavage!!
Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks.....
..................your cock doesnt get the time of day

fuck im not quoting that much shit

vs

nothen you came mad streched like whoa

v/OV not streched more funnier came harder punches more consistant pz

[LuStFuL]

Ready ta whore O.V.......others viewin this shit? man i gotta toast.
Im feedin him my dopeness in capsles...and it gave em a Over Dose.
played
He's been here since 03, and like me and Teleported elevators on Sym......
...........................I elevated faster than him.
wtf, r u kidding dude? u can do beta
He's done already, he cries behind his comp and says i dont give a fuck.
If you were the soul of a leppercaun and you departed that means your 'out of luck'.
no
His note LLL jr pre write note book bruned so he's Out of a Verse, so i give em a dose.
Of a 4 year olds skill at rhyming, mabey this shit will be a little less than close.
kinda basic..........
Dammit, dont choke, wait lemme do it for you, hay, look he cant swollow his pride.
That aint a hole in ya heart g............thats were my knife resides.
punch?
Your in First Class?.....i think a long time ago, some one sufficated and merked that crew.
I think he knows it................thats why he high-lighted it in the color blue.
could have been worded beta
He pressed reply to topic, not knowing if he should drop.....
He erased it 3 times after he tried to compete, then the pressure made his heart stop.
no
Ok now, you open yet for the closure of this nightmare, so then you could wake up?
After this week he'l stop pm'in me to give me head...mabey now his mouf will stay shut.
head is played

Sym-I hope this was a fluke dude.............i dunno, this was not good, nothing special in here at all. Fix ur structure so u don't have to do that small shit.

OV Dose


All your raps are weak whenever you battle people see fear
You shouldnt be here....
..................your skill jumps down a notch every leap year
good
He never gets out of the house id say its his greatest weakness
He signed up to get butchered...thinkin he would see some cleavage!!
ok
Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks.....
..................your cock doesnt get the time of day
nice
Tries to convince us hes a nice guy, Stop the rhetoric!
Im not tryin to egg you on....but son youve ALWAYS bennedict
ok
Sym gets pissed when he loses.........I tell ya this kid sucks
After this match your a stranded cannibal........
...............................................you b-eating yourself up
nah
Must be from Beverly Hills...think your smart? you're not very
Havent seen this much miss-spelling since before Tori got married
dunno who da hell tori iz
I'll bury your reputation...when he spells kids are amazed
Only time this fairy ever worked magic he ended up getting AIDS
ok
Sym you'll never win...i bet you wish your predictions count
Bumpin Tupac in your car is the ONLY time you'll get around
ok

OV Dose-u were pretty much focused on him not getting any. Should have gotten summore shit in there. There wern't really any personals.

v/OV Dose for having better punches

[Philly®]

sym ya verse was str8, but mad stretched.................

vs.

Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks.....
..................your cock doesnt get the time of day

v/ ov for better verse overall

[Ray Pissed]

for those who dont know...Tori Spelling is Donna from beverly hills 90210 and she played that redhead in scary movie 2

[Nib Oswald]

Symboalus: Line after line of unwitty, mediocre material. Only decent punch was your finishing
"Ok now, you open yet for the closure of this nightmare, so then you could wake up?
After this week he'l stop pm'in me to give me head...mabey now his mouf will stay shut."
Your personals and hits need to be more creative. I haven't read that many battles, but feel that the knife-in-the-heart line is played.

O. V. Dose: plenty of nice stuff here. Every line equaled or outdid Sym's best line.

"All your raps are weak whenever you battle people see fear
You shouldnt be here...your skill jumps down a notch every leap year
Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks...your cock doesnt get the time of day
Im not tryin to egg you on....but son youve ALWAYS bennedict
Must be from Beverly Hills...think your smart? you're not very
Havent seen this much miss-spelling since before Tori got married."
O. V. slaughtered this one.

Vote: O. V. Dose

[Ruthless.]

v/ ov.. will explain in the mag.

[Trahedy Siphon]

Sym:
Sorry, dude. No quotables.
You need to drop out for a bit, get used to battling
and start learning how to put punches together etc.

O.V.:
Hows your penis doin? he still livin in his hideaway?
Like dyslexic people readin clocks.....
..................your cock doesnt get the time of day

Overall:
Sym had nothing really, O.V. had some cool punches that
just lacked a bit of "harshness". Nothing made me go oooooo
or ahhhhh, so it wasn't that good a verse. But one thing is that
O.V. has mad potential to keep dropping dope verses.
Props for both showing.

Vote:O.V. Dose