yeah. this is all the text battles ive done since i first started. so yeah, im not that great lol. uppin
yeah. this is all the text battles ive done since i first started. so yeah, im not that great lol. uppin
wait? these 2 are the only txt battles you've done?
lol.. no need to lie now tuckzz...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz
and theres more... lol
tuCkzz - for the most part, ur opener was the debut of what was expected to be a solid verse. however, after your opener, you went straight basic with your verse. You need to be a little more creative with the wordplay.
Alphabetized - you verse was aiight. I loved the closer... "Yodi, may the force be with you" - incorporatin star wars made punch pretty entertaining. Seems like you did just enough to win... Solid effort on your part, but keep strivin for improvement cuz some lines werent as good as others...
Vote - Alphabetized
7-1... thanks for the feed antonio.... appretaite it dude...
anyways keepin this battle up the top to get more feed.
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
vs
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
I Herd This Flipped Some where the submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
well tuckzz dunno what happen this week you was coming strong in the beginning but came poorly this week seems like every one including me keyed up some shit but i have to say alpha took it he just came a lil bit stronger pz
v/alpha
well if u did, i didnt mean to get it from someone else, honestly never heard it.
thanks for the feed.
i was just saying its flipped not the same line or nothen but just was flipped
Word, 8-1... one last up 'for i get offline
Wassup, risin for feed.
Tuczz i didnt really find a quoteable in your verse. nothing was to spesh for me, it was so-so. Some lines were stretched, i just couldnt catch onto the flow of your verse, I flet your rhyme scheme was off. You had some decents concepts in your verse it just needed some re-wording.
Alpha you were consistent throughout your verse, some punches were average but never below. You had a couple of good ones in there that had me laughing, I saw more creativity in your verse. Flow was good, you didnt get to stretched out with your verse. You used a nice play on the name. Overall it was just a better verse.
v/alpha
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Thanks for the feed. Anyone else out there wanna leave some?
Tuckzz
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
Alpha
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
This was an aight battle in my opinion.
Tuckzz - Openers are important to me, and yours was way too stretched which wasnt a good start. After that it got a little better, But the punches still wasnt hitting hard enough for the win. The 2 lines i quoted were the best lines in your verse, but they still didnt stand out as "good".
Alpha - Your opener wasnt the best either, but it was at least not stretched. You picked up though aight, Some decent punches quite consistently, and some funny witty lines that had me laughing. Especially liked the submit line, funny shit.
Vote Alpha, for more consistency with harder punches, and some humourous lines along with better quotables.
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Thanks for the feed.
I think I took this one, but still lookin
for more feed and more people to give there opinion.
Im gettin off for now. word out.
Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
Ok, nothing special
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
Once again, nothing special
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
Good.
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
No, played.
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
Not feelin it
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
Good concept but wordin was fucked up
vs.
Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
Good.
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
Wasnt feelin it.
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
Aight
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
lol good, felt this was the best punch in the battle..
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
Ok
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
Not feelin it.
Overall this was a decent battle, gonna have to give it to Alphabatized tho cuz he had better punches then Tuckzz. Good battle to both of u.
V/Alpha
Word. Thanks for the feed.
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