Freestyle

[YUNGHITTMAN]

all these other niggas know dat im da illest on da block
any nigga think different then he gonna get droped
man he gonna get murked dog im putin on da hurt
Im da realest lil nigga watch these dudes get worked
any nigga actin up then i will be buckin
if my niggas start buckin then yall better start duckin quick
and cant no nigga spit shit here dats stoppin me
my mobb stay deep call me a muthafuckin prodigy
im da hottest b yall know dat im somethin sick
those hollow tip shells will stop da yappin out ya mouth quick
blow 1 into ya dome but i aint talkin astro
put a whole through ya vest have ya chest hot as tobasco
im a hustla yall other niggas shity
fuckin wit me get popped like a silicon tity b
and if dey still wana talk like a hoe
one shot to da head leave dey brains on da flo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...98#post3540998
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=253392

[EyeBite]

rhymes were iight
flow was pretty smooth
strucutre was good and even
vocab was simople not complex
topic was not cool cuz there wasnt one
overall this was iight for a beginner..elevate a bit
peace

[Quest.]

this was ok....not really that great....no complex use of words but still pretty good...structure was nice...u had no topic to stay on so i guess that helped a little...and plus this is helpin u elevate ya rhyme so that always good.....7.5/10