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  1. November 29th, 2005, 12:25 AM #1
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    Loss For Words

    aka WRITERS BLOCK!

    **to be honest ive had the worse case of writers block ive probably ever had, and its been goin on for about 3 weeks, (ask my crew lol)....juss havent been able 2 overcome it until tonight when i figured what better way to beat writers block then to write about it** so here is what i got!



    .::Writers Block::.
    this cluster of words misplacing thoughts a block of frustration
    temptation 2 write,need'd explanation 4 this lack of consentration
    how does a mind get 2 place with each word a thought 4gets
    faded intelect,block takes effect ruin'n a rep u cant write 2 protect
    thoughts blow passed,dead in the past ideas wither extremely fast
    at last you get lines,only 2 view the concept slip nolonger ez to grasp
    unable 2 umask talent concealed,intelligence embark a force field
    unimportant feeling becomes appealing ur weakness revealed
    hopeless attacks at pads writers block attracks empty acts
    mind suddenly turns black,unsure how 2 react,other than 2 turn back
    you constantly try again,worse than then,try to transcend
    brain unable to comprehend,nothingness descends at days end
    drop everything let it sit tryn to apprehend it unable to make due
    brain tries to reboot seems a waste,for ur lines just cant break thru
    mind a traffic jam backd up,ideas? mind definetly lack some
    times creates lines block will attrack some,until all erupts
    uve consistantly chipped at this disease,mind cold like a brainfreeze
    quickly write a few lines simply a game tease,b4 this brain free's
    very rarely will it juss break,unable to regenrate and quickly create
    often need a clean slate,2 embrace a new pace find a new place
    keep writing no matter the outcome,or how dumb keep dropping
    dont stop u got be better come out on top of this mind blocking
    a problem all writers need to overcome,but all will succeed
    proceed to beat this misleading concrete to the mind words chizle....
    .......till a day comes were the minds freed!



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  2. November 29th, 2005, 04:31 AM #2
    DJ Conspiracy
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    its that kinda deep mind shit im feelin it homie

    up ur rhyme sceme and ud be a sick kat
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  3. November 29th, 2005, 10:15 PM #3
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    up my rhyme scheme....i dont think thats what u ment, cuz whats wrong with my rhyme scheme lol ..j/k w/e tho

    UPPIN 4 SOMETHING.... i kno its not much, but i still would like some feedback..u kno 4 some much need'd confidence at the moment
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  4. November 29th, 2005, 11:16 PM #4
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    I liked this. I think the idea was good, having writers block, and writing about it to try get it outta ur system. Good shit very creative.

    The peice was aight itself. Flow and vocab was decent and obviously the meaning to it. Decent read i enjoyed it. Only thing i would say is maybe add a bit more emotion. But im new to OMs so i dont know exactly. But i enjoyed it.

    Keep it up...
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  5. November 29th, 2005, 11:31 PM #5
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    thanx 4 the feedback...i understand i lackd in some places..mainly cuz i trully had writers block, and i juss had HAD! 2 get something down!

    THANX
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  6. November 30th, 2005, 12:22 AM #6
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    you that was some crazy shit you had writers bolck an overcame it pretty damn good so over all this is some good shit
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  7. November 30th, 2005, 03:03 PM #7
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    Upppppinng

    Thanx 4 The Feedback

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  8. November 30th, 2005, 03:19 PM #8
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    i thought this was a real nice read. u should jus work on puttin some beefier multis in that shit here 'n' there.

    i know that's a lot to ask, specially when u have writers block, but i think some nicer multis woulda made this piece that much better.

    good drop
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  9. November 30th, 2005, 07:23 PM #9
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    ya i kno wat u mean, never was much for multies, i usually juss go for internals,flow,wordplay...but multies can beef a piece up so thanx


    last up....hopefully will have some new/better work out soon, now that im pretty sure im over this writers block crap!
    lol

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  10. November 30th, 2005, 07:48 PM #10
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    hey this was good homie...i liked the topic and the rhymes were good
    flow was smooth and vocab was good too........i was feelin it...
    multies were iight and complexity was iight too
    overall this was a good drop..keep at it

    check out my sig and vote on my topical battle fairly with a good explantion..thanks
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  11. November 30th, 2005, 11:55 PM #11
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    thanx....


    LAST UP 4 THIS PIECE...THEN I PLAN ON COMING OUT WITH SOME TRULY HOT ISH..(HOPEFULLY)...

    ***LOOKIN 4 SOME COLLABS ASWELL*** hollat at me on AIM: InkSpekz <<<
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  12. December 1st, 2005, 12:08 AM #12
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    I really liked how you taled writers block in this.But I think youc ould have put mor feeling and emotion into it about how it feels to have writers block.But you had good Imagry and your structure was good too.When I read this I could feel how you felt cuz I had writers block before too and it not good.And you had good use of your vocabulary in this piece and a good opener and closer too.Hope to see more from you soon homie.Keep writing

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