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Thread: Let's Clear The Air

  1. November 29th, 2005, 11:42 AM #1
    da2tha3
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    Let's Clear The Air

    Verse 1:

    Girl calm it, we'll rock this town, just need to breathe out
    Respiration gets faster as yo let me pull your pants down
    Let's hit the sack, now let's play games to make you shout
    But damn trout! That marine-like smell is so damed foul
    Do you wash down there? The question earns me a scowl
    "Fuck your bed-games, I ain't gon' be cleaning my bowel"
    Grabs a towel, covers that thing and the atmosphere clears
    Intoxication levels disappear, no longer for my life I fear
    She sits on the bed's end, and to the floor her eyes peer
    Deflated dear depression directs dis deathly diversion,
    With a knife point, she awaits to me the lord in person,
    So I'm stuck with a decaying carcass, let's clear the air son

    Hook (to the tune of She Will Be Loved by Maroon 5) :

    I don't like spending night to day
    Out in the garden in the pouring rain
    Tryin' to get rid of bodies' signs
    Cops will discover me in my due time, so
    Let's Clear The Air
    Let's Clear The Air.

    Verse 2:

    Several weeks down the line, sir my conscience hurts
    What if I'd just gone down on her, could it be worse?
    No answers from God, he's pre-occupied by converts
    No concerts, I'm too worried to leave my close 'premises'
    Still I reminisce, how's a girl made my life hell to live?
    I'm insecure, but do I deserve to feel like a terrorist?
    I should neglect it, and so my life continues regardless
    Walk in the street and it feels my reputation's tarnished
    "There's man-beast from who's hand that girl vanished"
    Chatter's harmless, then the town increases in tension,
    Front page articles my ex-girlfriend's a 'Missing Person'
    My calm turn into a red-mist, so let's clear the air son.

    Hook:

    I just hate spending all my days
    Walkin through town in the pouring rain
    Inhabitants have all lost their smiles
    Seems I'm crazy but my mind just whiles, so
    Let's Clear The Air
    Let's Clear The Air.

    Verse 3 / Outro:

    "Missing girl's body was finally excavated last night
    From her wounds, I would guess she lost a knife fight
    The light for this case came from residential insight,
    No recitings, this was no simple copy-cat murder case
    Seems the only untouched part, was her wonder face
    But here's a disgraceful aroma from her under-lace
    There's no trace of a forced entry, this one isn't sexual
    It seems that this deathly duel is far more "contextual"
    For only a fool would attempt making her genetilia drool
    Seems cruel, don't speak of the life-death conversion
    But this reporter has experienced this situation in person
    it certainly appears there was something in the air son"

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  2. November 29th, 2005, 01:54 PM #2
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    Yea, upping and all that, I know someone will leave feed some time.

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  3. November 29th, 2005, 03:02 PM #3
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3534918

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3534948


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  4. November 29th, 2005, 04:30 PM #4
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    lol, i liked this, (admitting i only read first couple of verses because i'm seriously tired) i liked the flow and structure in what i read, it was funny
    keep it up D
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  5. November 29th, 2005, 04:37 PM #5
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    nice peace man, nice. a couple multi's here which were good. vocab was very nice, its complexity was damn good. when you said "the marine like smell is so damn fouled" from there for a while it had me giggling. the description of the smell was hilarious. then, the second verse came in which brought the more emotion. the emotion was nice. the outro was in quotation marks.. if it was quoted, who from? cuz it was nice also. dope piece man, if i remember.. once December nominations for OM HOF come ill nominate this. it was a very enjoyable read.
  6. November 29th, 2005, 04:44 PM #6
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    Thanks man... the quotation was to make it seem like a reporter was speaking. It was all written by me, last night. I just picked up the pen and wrote it all, freestyle.

    Thanks for the feed, feels an honour to be nominated, never had that before. Thanks for that feed... uppin for more people....

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  7. November 29th, 2005, 04:54 PM #7
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    it was hot could ogf been better but keep it up
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  8. November 29th, 2005, 04:55 PM #8
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    So let me know what needs to be improved, what you liked, what was good, how the flow was, etc. That was hardly feedback man...

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  9. November 29th, 2005, 05:06 PM #9
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    this was a pretty different topic adn thats good
    rhymes were good and flow was good
    stuructre was good but chorus flo and struuctre was a bit off
    vocab wasnt that good......not that complex man
    a bit simple but still this was hot...feelin ikt
    keep it up man....leave feed on my OM..called Respect thanks
    peace
  10. November 29th, 2005, 05:18 PM #10
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    You thought my vocab was basic? Well that's cool, I thought in parts it was pretty complex, but that's by-the-by

    Thanks for the feed, I'll get to your piece in due course.

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  11. November 29th, 2005, 05:28 PM #11
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    It was nice man.....could've been better but you had some good stuff...Emotional was a good role in your piece left me emotional....yeah.......This is a piece were people in a relationship should read to clear there thoughts about people...yep...Nice.

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    Owned.
  12. November 29th, 2005, 08:19 PM #12
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    Yea, for real... uppin feed from others...

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  13. November 30th, 2005, 12:51 PM #13
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    Up for more feed people.

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  14. November 30th, 2005, 02:03 PM #14
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    this is damn hilarious. i've been in those shoes before.
    i could almost smell the stank on your bref.
    "Deflated dear depression directs dis deathly diversion,"

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  15. November 30th, 2005, 02:38 PM #15
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    Haha.. thanks a lot for that man.

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