Thor (1-0) vs Antonio Banderas (1-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

[Antonio Banderas]

Shit... I was just talkin to Thor bout this

Checkin in...

[Thor]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...99&postcount=9
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31&postcount=6
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&postcount=11
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89&postcount=7

[Thor]

Go 14 lines fuck, If I give you 20 your nose might start to bleed

[Antonio Banderas]

14 is good I get 3 line structure punches count as 2 lines...

[Antonio Banderas]

Ya crew's face is deformed & hiddeous, see what drugs do?
the vision of Written Warfare must be blurry,
.......................He's hardly seen with back to back Ws
Thor aint religious, baptizing words? they get boo dissed
Would tell ya to stick thread up ur ass,
....................But ya girlfriend's G String beat me to it
Even his notes are off, ur a little flat when ya singin
Been quotin the Renegade so long U even voiced his opinion
Bitchin so much he became one, and bought a teeny purse
Lost by a hair so many times,
.......................Ud think he was waxed by bikini amateurs
Ya writtens a jargon, symbolic of Twisted recruitment
Yeah he's leavin a permanent mark,
.......................even has the ink stains to prove it
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown

[Antonio Banderas]

Somethings wrong with this computer... UPPIN this to see if this thread goes to the top...

Take ur time Thor, u got til Friday. I only posted cuz I'm busy...

[Thor]

ima whore ya so badly, ull come up short, you aren't tight
this would be 1 hell a' ride,....
...but u dont meet the required height
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
dont pull a liar and say i suck, and that im played as shit
or ill leave u hangin on msn when u ask for elivation tips!
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand

whored

[Symboalus.]

v..thor.

[nolonger]

ant

Thor aint religious, baptizing words? they get boo dissed
Would tell ya to stick thread up ur ass,
....................But ya girlfriend's G String beat me to it


eh its ok

Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown

those were kinda nice.

Thor

too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors

poor wording but coo

ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand




VOTE THOR his 2 punches hit harder than the other dudes 3.

simple.

nothing great tho .

[Diamond Mind]

vote thor

didnt get the structure properly on banderas' verse

[Marvelous_]

Ya crew's face is deformed & hiddeous, see what drugs do?
the vision of Written Warfare must be blurry,
.......................He's hardly seen with back to back Ws
-lol decent punch..
Thor aint religious, baptizing words? they get boo dissed
Would tell ya to stick thread up ur ass,
....................But ya girlfriend's G String beat me to it
-nah not feelin this one much..
Even his notes are off, ur a little flat when ya singin
Been quotin the Renegade so long U even voiced his opinion
-lol this was alright..
Bitchin so much he became one, and bought a teeny purse
Lost by a hair so many times,
.......................Ud think he was waxed by bikini amateurs
-another decent punch once again..
Ya writtens a jargon, symbolic of Twisted recruitment
Yeah he's leavin a permanent mark,
.......................even has the ink stains to prove it
-didnt see much of a punch in this line, but gyea decent bar..
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
-lol gyea im feelin this..
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown
-aiite pretty cool

vs.

ima whore ya so badly, ull come up short, you aren't tight
this would be 1 hell a' ride,....
...but u dont meet the required height
-lmfao funny punch yo.
the seasons be changin and your still not elevated, ya soft
Yea winters almost on but it doesnt mean YOU should fall off
-lol decent bar yo.
too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
-haha another funny punch..
dont pull a liar and say i suck, and that im played as shit
or ill leave u hangin on msn when u ask for elivation tips!
-lol must be a personal ah? cool..
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
-nice.. i like it
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
-nah not likin' it too much
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand
-lmfao. sick closer.. nice

this battle was pretty much one sided shit.. AB came w/ mainly decent punches and lines.. where thor came more stronger w/ the punches.. he had a couple of dope lines in there.. AB started off kinda slow.. but picked shit up in the last 4 lines.. but he had to come more consistent to beat thor in this.. thor came decent or above decent in every line except one.. you doin good lately yo.. gj..

v/thor

pz..

[Untold.]

Thor aint religious, baptizing words? they get boo dissed
Would tell ya to stick thread up ur ass,
....................But ya girlfriend's G String beat me to it
Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown

vs.

too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
TNL dont need u, they see ur on a dead end route, which
is the ONLY reason they still havent turned on you, bitch!
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand

ab, good verse. some good concepts and nice punches, wasn't consistant though.
thor, dope verse. harder punches and way more consistancy with them.

v/ thor

[Ruthless.]

v/thor. will explain in mag.. but good battle guys.

[Supernatural]

Kids got no bars, ya broke to the point even ya poor sweat
Yeah, RB got you on lock
...........that's why no crew forums open up the doors yet
Straight rippin through (T)s, now a (hor) status is shown
Are you crowned as Double D..,
....................or did you just milk yourself to the thrown

vs.

too bad we gota up key verses, cuz i could use a 1 liner...
that would leave you fucking flat like titty sex with minors
my harshness will terrify u good, this is far from close, son
ill scare the hair off your head cuz i wont win by just one
ill be affraid if this fags over confident, scared as shit, damn
cuz the last time he got cocky there was also his right hand


vote -Thor.