phillycannonz (0-0) vs Liljayy921.. (0-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

[Philly®]

check.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252809
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252808
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=3542781
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=3542788

[A. Know-phistage]

check

[A. Know-phistage]

Philly I Own You,Son You,and i do it for fun dude
Id tell him to get his head out his ass....
... but thiers no were else to plug you
i smack you whore and will some body Claim This Fag?
i should of raked you up along time ago,but The Season Passed
philly likes it ruff,but seems like the cannon was hurtin
my punches'll leave this cat in motion and i aint talking bout jerking
i Take care of pussies,im a vet kid so ill leave you threats
P Drowns Noobs In The Pool Just To Get them Wet
im Tired Of You Man,Yeah? Ya Verse Just Had Me Beat
s'Not That You Nice Man,But That^ Wack Shit Was Weak


blah keyed up somthen new style pz ill leave links later

i edited it but he a drop yet so thats cool?

[Philly®]

oh yeah i got suspended cuz my teacher said i cussed him out and i dont remember fucked up but beats a day of school

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wow you got suspended... bet this kid thinks he's cool
wha he ment 2 say "mom beat my ass right after school"
got me horse from dissin you.. still not working to hard
he came wit a farmer flow.. straight outta "the barn yard"
wathing basketball game's the only time we've seen jay skillz
drag ya mouse cross real.. wouldn't make da highlight reel
dudes lines wack, pick up slack when you drop your verse
when it comes to picking a good name this guy's the worst
ya crew of animals 'l never measure up 2 me, jay's so wack
all ya'll names on the roster.. reminds me of hay stack's

[Thor]

Philly I Own You,Son You,and i do it for fun dude
Id tell him to get his head out his ass....
... but thiers no were else to plug you
^i had a punch like this, second bars kinda the same but it when like this

Another kid thats straight shit, u even think when u key?
I'de say take ya head out ya ass,...
...but you should see wut i mean


Anyways im guna have to give this to Jay, for less played lines, theres really no quotables here but yeah. Philly your flow got a little betterjust step up your punches anc reativity

V/Liljay

[Kontext]

I think Jay came a lil harder in this one i liked his flow and he was juss less basic to me

so vote=LilJay

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Eh. No quotables here. You both came played and your punches were very basic. Your both still spittin' FL. My advice to both of you is spend more time on your verse and think of fresher concepts. Know one wants to read a verse with a whole bunch of punches we've seen 43284749x already.

You both dropped weak that's the only reason it's a hard choice for me but, overall I think jay came less played.

v//liljay

[Antonio Banderas]

Guess I gotta be the odd ball here... LilJay seemed way to basic to me... His verse just didnt hold any weight towards the end... I felt the Phillycannoz came harder and even made me laugh at some of his stuff...

Vote - PhillyCannoz, better disses

[A. Know-phistage]

3-1 uppin

Ill Edit With Links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3542376
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3542401
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31#post3542431
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...48#post3542448

[Philly®]

wow,..............................3-1.....................

Links edited in

[Seck]

noone had anything too special but liljay was more consistent throughout his verse

vote liljay

[Skrollz]

v/ philly

[Nib Oswald]

LillJay921- Simple, effective structure and OK lines throughout, though nothing particularly witty. Can I just say that "s'Not That You Nice Man,But That^ Wack Shit Was Weak" should only be used if your opponent actually drops before you do.
Fave line: "Id tell him to get his head out his ass... but thiers no were else to plug you"

phillycannonz- Didn't feel your opening couplet at all, though there was much better effort in rhyming towards the end of your verse. The horse line was mehhh, I liked the "drag ya mouse cross real.. wouldn't make da highlight reel" line, the rest just wasn't good enough humour or aggression-wise.

Vote: LillJay921 Not much between the two, but Lill's tone was stronger throughout.

[Alphabetized]

v/ philly

Dude leave feed.

Ok...
Philly- You kinda centered your verse on the one wack
qoute u had. To me your verse seemed pretty elementary.
I think you can deffenetly come harder than you did here.
Try to focus on the battle more than dissing a qoute.
Some of your lines were played like the
"at picking names hes the worst", must have heard that 100000 times.
You came so-so

Lilj- You came with some funny concepts, but you deffenetly could
have worded them better. U got a chuckle out of me honestly, and
i almost never laugh when reading verses. Your flow was more
consistant, but you need to work on wording. Good drop.

V/lilj, for being more consistant n enjoyable.