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Bring it HARD fellaz!
10-12 lines
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Bring it HARD fellaz!
Drop 30 minutes after checkin in fellaz
good luck!
CheCC In........................................
good luCC
U knows i bring it and take it hard!
MagicConcept? Was is that somekind of trick...u motherfucking prick!!
This guy acts like his parents jerk him, splickedy wack and a splaterty splat!
Ur weak u aint got no peak only when u give mom a winky peep!
U know she be taking it just like a monkey on serious pop! POW
U know ull only be seeing the end of my crack, now im back!
This be the wackiest wack from Cizzy Wizzys crack!
Anyway fools got to take my man to get the back sack and crack!
(Takes a bow!)
Peice out A town down
Ok ima crush dis boy then give him an uppercut so he can say he raised his game higher
Then move like "Eminem" and play this bitches ass like his name was "Mariah"// ooo
I'm connecting~hits quicker than erected~dicks on unsuspected~chicks
When I go to punch JS you'll try and stop me so you really protecting~shit//
Waited a while for my come~back battling me you shouldnt have done~that
This aint gonna jus gonna be a KO coz u gonna get knocked down with one~smack//
You a pussy like that boy "Lloyd" I could see you singing "south~side"
You got a high voice with a dick in your a.rse thats y u screaming with your mouth~wide//
see my lines are fresh, your bars thourogh crummy/
talkin shit i'll smoke your ass like we was in marlboro country*/
you defeat me, maybe see i'll disable-thee fataly/
don't play-wit-me like your weak shit will eva be phasin-me/
see the truth of the matter is you deserve no respect/
your rhyme style sucks and your punches just don't connect/
theres just no effect it closely kags at-best-of-you/
how can it be clever when your rhymes are mostly about f@gs-'n'-transexuals/
( get a life ) homo piece a shit
YO its been 37 minutes, this bitch has bailed, tight ryhming cizzy wizzy i thought this guy with 500 + posts was gna rip it.... but you've got him runnin scared!
shit sorry i take it back........................
wrong emcee to rap against...........................................
i dont understand this battle..rules say..10-12 lines..one guy drops close 8 lines..other dude drops near 16 lines..wats going on here?
i din like much from this battle at all
magic had a couple of better rhymes..n puns...
i dont know..
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Cizzy Wizzy brought it direct....
MagicConcept? Was is that somekind of trick...u motherfucking prick!!
Where as MagicConcept although had better structure got lost in a weird gay vibe if you ask me "I'm connecting~hits quicker than erected~dicks "
"protecting~shit" "a high voice with a dick in your a.rse" "shit i'll smoke your ass" "play-wit-me like your weak shit" "sucks and your punches"
with that in mind you give your self a diss at the end... how can it be clever when your rhymes are mostly about f@gs-'n'-transexuals
there my vote goes to Cizzy Wizzy.
Enjoyed this battle though
ya some fuccin pussies..................on the real
jus because i drop mre than 12......... thats jus me
oh well uppin on this noob...
Cizzy wizzy - I didnt like any of the barz in ur verse. None of ur punches was hitting at all, and it was way too basic / simplisitic. Needed personals too and considerin the small vocab u used throughout the verse u couldve at least made every line rhyme.
elevate.
Magic concept - U came alot harder than ur opponent, didnt need to come as hard as u did for the win. Your punches were hitting alot harder than cizzys and u brought a more complex and interestin verse that was worth reading.
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magic -
You a pussy like that boy "Lloyd" I could see you singing "south~side"
You got a high voice with a dick in your a.rse thats y u screaming with your mouth~wide//
I'm connecting~hits quicker than erected~dicks on unsuspected~chicks
When I go to punch JS you'll try and stop me so you really protecting~shit//
V/ magic for the reasons above, and having some quotables.
Hit the link in my sig and leave a fair wid the same respect
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uppin for votes..........
come people vote.......
same but if im right on wat i think magic wonOriginally Posted by Vortex
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