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    Why live to die?

    Why live when you gonna die,
    6 feet deep, ya soul gonna fly,
    Wait there then for ya judgement, ya sins gonna be
    Counted, from every murder to every lie,
    You'll be one step shy,
    From Heavenly love to hell fire fry

    Homie, we all gotta go
    Can't ya see the bullets fly to and fro,
    Watch, we'll meet in heaven that's for show (Heavenly Ghetto)
    Until then pray, that when we die..it doesn't be excrutiatingly slow,
    Because i wanna die in a moment, not in a lifetime bro........

    Living life like this, can't get me bliss
    Fake G's after me, takin the piss
    Someones bodies gonna fall, mine or his
    Remember a bullet skims once, 2nd time it aint gonna miss

    We livin dangerously
    Tryin to tell ma message rhythemitcally,
    Peacefully, whil livin all alone in this misery...all lonely
    Gunshots pass by quickly, but i aint gonna plea,
    When my death comes, i'll stare it in the face....Die bravely
    Until then i'm gonna hail and ryde like a mercenary...........

    I can see how y'all percieve me,
    Say i'm a fool, or maybe on the verge of insanity,
    To try and bring peacy in times like these,
    When crooked cops out buzily,
    Tryin ta put everyone like me behind bars......quicly
    But i want ta spread a message, spread it efficiently,
    To stop street voilence we have ta start somewhere....
    Why not internally.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    Pretty decent verse. i liked the starting. emcees have a major tendency to drift off the main topic near the end but you really kept it straight up. The flow seemed a little off for me but you can never tell from keystyle shit, but anyway the structure was practically perfect, the description and the image of this piece was pretty dope. I hope to see more of your stuff and see you improve. you got mass potential. Just keep it real.

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    thanks for the comments, first official comment i got after making it known i'm a paki, i'll check out ya om soon, uppin'
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    Pretty decent verse. i liked the starting. emcees have a major tendency to drift off the main topic near the end but you really kept it straight up. The flow seemed a little off for me but you can never tell from keystyle shit, but anyway the structure was practically perfect, the description and the image of this piece was pretty dope. I hope to see more of your stuff and see you improve. you got mass potential. Just keep it real.

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    ^wasn't that just what was said bforee, man give origina; comments

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    uppin for comments

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    its sick paka, like, i guess both of them said lol, structure could be off but it also could flow like rio grande...i dont think the paki matters, this board sleeps and you know this...

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    Basic...
    It was aii
    some seemed off flow
    depends on the beat you do it too. Overall, it was average at best. Try and throw in some multies and work on flow
    keep it up tho
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    Uppin for more comments, why RB gone dead all of a sudden, where are y'all

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    well as most say these negative things as if they know anyway it was good judging by the words in it the meaning behind all of it is all that really counts ok

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    this was ight topic was ight...
    you did drift off topic in sum palces but either came back or triee to come back on track

    flow waas iight,,.same witn strucutre...
    rhymes were goood..not too simple not simple
    pretty complex but no exactly
    good drop overall keep it up..peace..linkz are in sig

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    Thanks for the comment..........Uppin'

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    this was pretty decent yo liked the flow of it keep droppin and yo hit up the battles in my sig

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