Death? Life? Or Fate (Thunder, Under Remix)

[Soule]

You hit me with thunder! Just a lil thunder!
Took me under. 1,000 miles Down Under!!!!!

Death!

The other night. I was shot 21 bullets in my chest.
But i put up a fight. This morning they pulled the plug, Put me to rest.
Now i'm in heaven with all the great ones. Eddie Guerrero still latino heat.
Pac and biggie still raising their guns. Martin Luther king J.R taking a seat.
Looking down on earth. Mom and dad siting in tears.
My baby's going threw birth. My girl's puting up with her fears.
And it makes me sad. Make's my bro mad.
Can't do a damn thing. And i just met sting.

You hit me with thunder! Just a lil thunder!
Took me under. 1,000 miles Down Under!!!!!

Life

Playing foot ball with the boy's. Then something weird goes down.
I fall down and hear a noise. And im on earth's ground.
A look forwerd and see me new baby girl. And see my dad 2.
We can cheat death with a twirl. 38 is too young life's not due.
I since a cause. And a effect.
My dad is dead, killed by his boss. And im pissed,time to de-fect.
Pull out a gun and put 21 bullets in his chest.
I am in jail with fire in my eyez. Im the same guy that i dispize.

You hit me with thunder! Just a lil thunder!
Took me under. 1,000 miles Down Under!!!!!

Fate

Is this fate? Is this hate?
Will i die? Will she cry?
It's been 20 years now. Im 58.
My baby is a model. I cant relate.
The fat ass cop tells me i got a visiter.
It's my baby. What a great visiter.
She tell's me she will bail me out.
I told her no. And on her face was a pout.
I will die at lunch.
And it won't be by a simple punch.

You hit me with thunder! Just a lil thunder!
Took me under. 1,000 miles Down Under!!!!!

[Soule]

uppon.

[Soule]

uppin.

[Daz]

this shit is retardly confusing.
I dont see a connection through anything anywhere in this story.
Seriously..Wtf are you doing?

try again.

[EyeBite]

topic seemed creative...but when i read it it seemed not that ointeresting as i thought it would be....your rhymes were iight....compleixty wa not entirely here..u atleast tried....flow was smooth most of the time..struucvtre was even most of the time too....iight drop....keep it up.and keep elevationg..peace