10-12 lines
5 mins to check
20 to drop
10-12 lines
5 mins to check
20 to drop
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checking in
This battles uneven, you should duck like a bitch ass
You came like a pussy.. guess you could call it a Ms. match
But I think we're both stupid now, & I ain't lyin to ya'll
He's dumb for tryin to beat me...I'm dumb for tryin at all
pop caps in your brain, cock my fuckin' lyrical gun
I'll have your head a-jar, and leave your brain in one
^^pfff... U belong in a nursin home. im eat up ya scriptz
punchlines so old they new burger king when he was a prince
this fag is a nerdy geek..... i do pray you get wrecked kid
and you deserve it, i mean, who sets a battle an' forgets to check in?
ill leave this king crownless, hack his legs off n leave him defeeted
son ill make a shit sandwich with ur rhymes & force u to eat it
Tex got no respect for bitches on RB, its like i just diss-members
i place seeds of doubt in ur mind, so u cud say i got green fingers
tomorrow u'll prolly goto skool n say that Vortex just slapped ya
ur careers now over, even u admit in ur sig this is "The Final Chapter"
u dull, whats a King w/e the bling u shudda been called The Whore Queen
14, kid u cud'nt protect against my punches wit a fuckin mettaphor screen
ill terrorize this slag like i was in the Squad with Joe n flip Big Puns
how the fuck this bitch expect to hurt me when he's shooting potato gunz?
ill smack this cunt and leave him tangoed like that orange bastard
i'm not a builder by trade but im still leavin this nigga plastered
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way to not check in and then post late as fuck dumbass
rise
^shut the fuck up chump..i told u my computer was freezing up dick breath..i cud just about post my verse
uppin this motherfucker
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cool battle. both did yall thing. i thought vortex came better with the personals and punches though. king your's were decent but they just didnt hit hard enough. maybe you should've incorporated some personals into your verse. anyways, my v/ Vortex
thanx fo das input blud...but u diddnt poll ur vote
come onm lets get this closed real quickly folks
uppin 3
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Punches - Vortex
Multis - None Really
Flow - Vortex
Vocab - King
Hostility - Vortex
Vote - Vortex..........1
Structure - Both Good
Flow - Vortex
Personals - TheKing
Punches - Vortex
Wittyness - Vortex
Vocab - The King
Wordplay - Vortex
Multies - None
Ok this was a pretty close battle and was good to read
But Vortex came stronger in more categories so...
Vote/Vortex
oh come on fuckers n close this shit so i can start sum mo battles
up the fuck 4
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Vortex, you had way better all around verse, but The Kings shit was funnier!
V/ Vortex for having everything else.
hit up the battles in my sig please.
my vote goes to vortex for better punches and flow.
v//vor
AI
“ˇViva la Revolución!”
i'm sorry...
vor - your verse was poor in my opinion. i mean, not that bad, but no real hard hitting punches. you gotta work on better set ups and actually hitting your opponent. and short'n ya lines a lil bit.
king - definately had the stronger verse. the burger king line was illy to. dope really. maybe like 1 bar i didn't like, but fuck it. you did good.
v/ king... more consistany.
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