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Thread: Inside War.

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    Inside War.

    Inside War.
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    intricate emotions, he needs to stay in constant motion
    he hears bombs explodin, guns unloadin, mass commotion
    theres the fear of death rushin through the soldiers' minds
    they have no desire to die here on these frontlines
    many wont survive, but they try keep their spirits high
    even though deep down their hearts r filled wit doubt
    n they cringe at the sound of lifeless bodys hitten the ground
    you hear the horrid noise from it and dont want to listen
    this situation these soldiers r in is almost impossible to live in
    and they remember back home, o do they wish to go back
    there sick and tired of constantly hearin guns blast
    in this place life gets taken so fast, and its very frightenin
    the soldiers are always on duty, stayin up all night and
    fearin the next day of fightin.. fear plays a big factor in war
    soldiers get on the floor, and start to pray to thier lord
    or send letters to their family seein tellin that hes doin good
    but in the inside hes really not feeling as he should
    hes really feeling depressed, constantly fearing death
    the feeling that till the war is over wont leave his head
    and he gets a break every holiday, but that aint enough
    he misses his wifes lust n playin wit his kids, havin fun
    ..and he gets ready, he holds his gun very steady
    his backpacks heavy, fears striking his mind already
    he runs outside, he finds a place to duck and cover
    he doesnt want to leave his wife a single mother..
    he must stay alive, he suddenly feels courage inside
    the soldier blasts his gun, killing any enemie in sight
    but all of a sudden, pain hits him, he's been shot in the chest
    his skin penetrated by led, he hits the ground and bleeds to death
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    I was wondering whether this was more of a poetic scripture. The rhyming wasnt alwayz there from my vantage point. I could be wrong tho. Despite that I was feelin the flow of it. And some of the vocab you used was very descriptive. Enjoyable read.. thnx for that.

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    I was wondering whether this was more of a poetic scripture. The rhyming wasnt alwayz there from my vantage point. I could be wrong tho. Despite that I was feelin the flow of it. And some of the vocab you used was very descriptive. Enjoyable read.. and i say you should keep it up you got sum skillz...peace

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    can you leave feed on my new drop..thanks

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    uppin

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    can you leave feed on my new drop now..thanks

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    uppin..

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    uppin.. somebody..please drop feed.

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    uppin.

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    uppin. drop some feed please.

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    uppin......

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    i upp'd 3 times the amount that i got feed. why cant you drop feed!?!?

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