NewGangsta(NG)

[young boss]

Ha-Ha

I'm new 2 this cite but I aint new 2 da game
I'm da start of da bullet used 2 blow out ya brain
2 hot 4 yo block when I cock my glock
wearin reeboks, white socks and a flow you can't stop
Cuz see I'm Young Boss wit cash signs in my whole name
Slash da s's Im da grinch who stole da dope game
I go bananas so you can call me young gorilla
Young nigga, gangsta figga, while I'm pullen dese triggas
I'm known as da mailman when mailin bullets 2 yo dome
Weed in da pistol blast and now you gone home alone
Fully loaded like Japan off dat cheif-chi-chong
I even come 2 church strapped in case da preacher get wrong
Whoppin niggas ass 4 cash is my casualties
Say a nigga heavy duty like I'm runnin on batteries
Addicted 2 dat cash wantin more cuz I'm a money feen
Smoke you off da block hot cuz I'm da new nigga-teen

[E.z. eddie]

its all right but that shit belongs in a battle not a open mic
if u put some punch lines on daqt shit and battle some 1 u could be real dope
when u battle some 1 pm me cause i wanna see ur shit u look like u could be pretty good

( a least better than me)

[<Supreme>]

Thats gd, u look like ure gonna be gd in battles

u dont hav to use sive 104859589 font, most ppl can read size 14...lol

[jake]

..word on the size...to be honest i found it a bit basic...but you have a nice aggresive flow that will be helpful to you if applied to battles...like stated above..add a few punchlines, then a few multi's...and this piece would be nice...1

[NYsFinest]

I agree i felt that like it was a battle. sounded like it was off the dome kinda flow to it.. It was sort of typical in its style and content but i actually liked it. Keep that shit up kid. word

[D. Jizzle.]

i like the word play the font killed it tho this was good still u will do good here but next time not a battle verse

[Mistral]

Needs legit title