Nice Drop...i especially liked the line: In battle believe it or not I was always scared 2 go
A soldier’s deepest fear!
……Dying before accomplishing more
This was a deep peace a little bit more vocab. would make it deeper but nice man
Nice Drop...i especially liked the line: In battle believe it or not I was always scared 2 go
A soldier’s deepest fear!
……Dying before accomplishing more
This was a deep peace a little bit more vocab. would make it deeper but nice man
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Nice Drop...i especially liked the line: In battle believe it or not I was always scared 2 go
A soldier’s deepest fear!
……Dying before accomplishing more
This was a deep peace a little bit more vocab. would make it deeper but nice man
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still here and uppin...that reply was from a cousin of my using my name at the time but still looking for feedback...uppin
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flow was weak ann not all sentences rhymed. sort out da rhymes nd keep it up.
uppin
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the topic is fucking Great, yo. the things you talk about are extremely interesting. but it seems you have the same problem i do. just writing our true emotions without any structure. it is a great fucking OM but to become a song it would need better stucture. i wish i would have come up with that idea. but the hungry kid gets the food, right? nice fucking job on the real. you've inspired me to write tonight and that takes a lot since i am currently deployed in Iraq. keep this shit up.
thankz jo. uppin
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hey i liked that piece im feeling it, was deep 2!...nice flow, you should try out an audio 4 it...should be good
hope 2 c more in the future
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Not bad, for the most part I enjoyed it, easy to follow, one thing id probably suggest is that you branch out scheme-wise, try something a little different, switch it up every so often to keep the reader interested. I enjoyed this piece. The potentials there, just keep working at it.
aiight il use that advice
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yo, return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=269190
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i'm feelin this peice real life shit, nice flow too
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Kiss a death (J muah)
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My games is rock solid like concrete
N dogg ya cant compete
My flows cold like October n ur the trick cuz I’m the treat
We the undisputed champs n we goin for repeat
But this time we got no debt gonna get off the street
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