10 lines
check in 20 min
drop asap
house rulz
u spit 1st
goodluck
-Villain-
el gallo negro
10 lines
check in 20 min
drop asap
house rulz
u spit 1st
goodluck
ima check this battle out when ya both spit pm me when its done
those who werent able to stop me
mic assassin-(5-3)
LOL Check........ur a herb Gallo...................
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Punches to the Cranium
:box2:
what eva man good luck. i set this up cauz u don't like my rulz so i made so u can't use ya rulz
Lol In This Battle Ur Done Son,Tryna Battle Me? Ur Tha Fuckin Dumb One
Cuz U Have No Faith In Ur Self N I Don’t Blame U If U Think U Gonna Get Ko’d By Tum Tum
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Originally Posted by El Gallo Negro
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Ill Smack You till you Spit your Words wit ah Blur....Fuck ya Herb
Cuz This Guy Callz Himself A Nigga When In His Name He Slangin A Racial Slur
Ya Lyrix are Billigerant and Ignorant..maybe Next time betta Luck
Change Da Rulez Fo wha? Like Chopped up Rulers Ya neva Measure Up
Your downfalls that you Touch On More Ballz than Andy Roddick
And Dis Battle Could B Da Finalz But El only get a "MetaL" When his Gears Solid
Negro the only Fuckin thang you'll be gettin from this battle is a quick loss
Shot cannons, nicking ya back of,cuz I spit heat like Dragons garglin hot sauce
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Punches to the Cranium
:box2:
yo ill vote tis battle if someone vote my battle i just need 3 more votes
yah punches is aimed for the cranium but they messing
smilie faces in yah sig & u still claim to be a villian real convincing
my rhymes are nightmares for yours are bunny dreams
keep claiming to be sick i guess i'll be the vacine
claim to be a vet but the only wins u get is from newbs
punches leave dead on the ground making u feel dissolute
maybe you do spit like dragons because i only hear shit comming from ya mouth*
you cant' kill me or hit me even if i was o.j's spouse
betta step back cauz i won't hesistate to slap u punk
if u live in the hood its cause i didn't have room in the trunk
* = dragons breath
nice job quoting my other battle
villian-good verse nice struc..but didn't like most of ur
verse.
Gallo-good verse.hit harder was personal..
v//gallo
SAVAGE
uppin 1
This is how your critique a rhyme
First for villian
Ill Smack You till you Spit your Words wit ah Blur--Weak open. generic
This Guy Callz Himself A Nigga When In His Name He Slangin A Racial Slur--What is your point? 99% of rappers use refer to themselves as nigga?
Like Chopped up Rulers Ya neva Measure Up--Makes no sense. A broken ruler maybe...but who chops rulers?
But El only get a "MetaL" When his Gears Solid--Coulda been a decent punchline. Even though most of your metty's come from video games and cartoons.(understandable since your 14)
spit heat like Dragons garglin hot sauce--...
now El Gallo
yah punches is aimed for the cranium but they messing(missing)--Personal...excellent start/set up bar
smilie faces in yah sig & u still claim to be a villian real convincing--Fire metty. Ended Villian right there
keep claiming to be sick i guess i'll be the vacine
claim to be a vet but the only wins u get is from newbs--Nice set up, TRUE statement and how harder can you hit someone?
maybe you do spit like dragons because i only hear shit comming from ya mouth*
you cant' kill me or hit me even if i was o.j's spouse--Here's where he gets weak. Nice try on confronting one of his bars. Just didnt work
if u live in the hood its cause i didn't have room in the trunk--Woulda worked against a hood offensive rapper like myself. Not strong against this opponent however.
I say Gallo hands down.
http://www.soundclick.com/yungjabz I can actually rap, w/o typing...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=249130
Am I really hating? Or is it that I speak truth and exposing the frauds for what they really are...
[B]"You could lose ya jaw, from the four, while ya man bleed. Or you could lose a lung, coughing blood til you can't br3ath. I shellshock you nigga, til you death and you can't see"
villain-o.k shit dont decroate ur verse wit quotes and shit i leanr that the bad way
o.k punches kind of basic nuffin oringal,
el-good stuff nice wordplay, good punches and flow,needs 2 work on personals
v//el
hit up a battle in my sig, except the 3rd 1 cuz its not done yet.
uppin 2
flow-gallo
structure-gallo
punches-villain
personals-villain
wordplay-vilain
wittiness-gallo
creativity-gallo
overall-gallo
here gallo
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247946
honest drop
nice battle gallo, nice flow with some nice punches.... when i first read villians i didnt think you would be able to measure up.... hahaha but i guess you put all the damn broken rulers together cuzz you came with somethin better
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