UrbanRealist (0-1) vs. rile1 (0-1)

[Lay Doubt.]

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

[Brother Blue Collar]

check, sup rile





http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247730

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247381

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247420

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247397































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i secretly hate you

[rile1]

^^LMao CHeck.... LIke I DIdnt KNow THat













^^*bets 5 bucks he'll use that in a punch*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&postcount=24
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&postcount=11
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...93&postcount=8
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&postcount=12

[Brother Blue Collar]

the fact that rile one likes men shouldn't surpise me,
after all that is a transvestite that he has in his avy
gravity's the only thing that holds rile one down, son
rile's so lonley,ain't got friends except for issac newton
rile one's punches are really just outdated dope concepts
he needs an escort on drugs just to write his played texts
rile's an unoriginal textcee at best, his setups embodies shit
even in his wackness he manages to rip off dogma's smith
rile not even human looking, cut off any body part for study
might be a bug of sum type but he's always been a gnat to me

[rile1]

The Cars roaring while this gay is snoring, ima break it brah
told'em im too sexy for my shirt........
..........................................and this fag tryed to take it off!!
shake it? nah, give me a rest, u can only annoy at best
What else can Matell?..................Ur just a toy at text
boy cant mess with me, more of a R&B kid, not a fighter
s'why u cryed when I grabbed ya Usher's and Let it Burn..with a lighter
im tighter, ur verses always lack color, so im fixing this cat
u always complain, and u get mad at us bitching ur wack?
itching to crack, ill eat u for breakfast kid, a horror story fast
cuz Denny's laying dead while IHOP all over his sorry ass

*waits for news to come in......* OWNED!!!! lol its due at 12 stupid

EDIT: spelling mistake

[Brother Blue Collar]

blah at this being pacific, i don't give a shit i'm editing verse, since it ain't 12 pacific yet.

[Untold.]

the fact that rile likes men shouldn't surpise me,
after all thati s transvestite he got in his avy

vs.

The Cars roaring while this gay is snoring, ima break it brah
told'em im too sexy for my shirt........
..........................................and this fag tryed to take it off!!
shake it? nah, give me a rest, u can only annoy at best
What else can Matell?..................Ur just a toy at text
itching to crack, ill eat u for breakfast kid, a horror story fast
cuz Denny's laying dead while IHOP all over his sorry ass

This shit was basically one sided. Urb came real weak. Rile, dope drop.

V/ rile1

[Mimesis.]

shake it? nah, give me a rest, u can only annoy at best
What else can Matell?..................Ur just a toy at text
boy cant mess with me, more of a R&B kid, not a fighter
s'why u cryed when I grabbed ya Usher's and Let it Burn..with a lighter

vs.

rile not even human looking, cut off any body part for study
might be a bug of sum type but he's always been a gnat to me

Vote - Rile1

[KempoMRK]

Urban, your wording was pretty poor, you can tell that as you had like rile's name in about 5 of your lines, try and mix shit up a bit. You didn't have much that hit and overall it wheren't an all that good a verse, you need to improve your wording.

rile, the opener was pretty decent but the rest was just consistantly better than urban, nothing all that special, but enough to win.

v/ rile1

[rile1]

^thanks to the votes, more?

[-Immense-]

the fact that rile one likes men shouldn't surpise me,
after all that is a transvestite that he has in his avy

vs

nothing

vote urban realist

[rile1]

^^^ lmfao at him quoting a slanted line, more votes please

[Philly®]

the fact that rile one likes men shouldn't surpise me,
after all that is a transvestite that he has in his avy
lol

vs.

The Cars roaring while this gay is snoring, ima break it brah
told'em im too sexy for my shirt........
..........................................and this fag tryed to take it off!!
boy cant mess with me, more of a R&B kid, not a fighter
s'why u cryed when I grabbed ya Usher's and Let it Burn..with a lighter

not all ya lines, but these alone was enuff,......dope ass usher line

V/rile for better verse and more quotables,.......one sided

[EmceeR]

^^coolio.... upping for more if people will vote more... hecka people dont

[Mr. Write]

The Cars roaring while this gay is snoring, ima break it brah
told'em im too sexy for my shirt........
..........................................and this fag tryed to take it off!!
itching to crack, ill eat u for breakfast kid, a horror story fast
cuz Denny's laying dead while IHOP all over his sorry ass

vs

rile not even human looking, cut off any body part for study
might be a bug of sum type but he's always been a gnat to me

that ihop line was pretty nice ive never seen that concept.

v/ rile1