Daedal (1-0) vs. Makeveli Trained (1-0)

[Lay Doubt.]

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

[Tony B]

can you say...........rematch?
16 lines, that good?
g' luck btw

[Mimesis.]

Can you say.. me beating you for the third time total?

16 is fine.

[Amendment]

fuck it, i'm only going 12 unless you show. if you drop though i'll edit this w/ my real verse

Don’t lie, ya wanted to be Draedal didn’t you, D?
Only delete R cuz his mom wont let em see those movies
I know tupac died, so all those played personals are wack
I say we dead Daedal just for havin a fuckin name like that
See wordplay, metas, n multies is really all I need to spit
I would kill you wit personals, but you never even do shit
Get outta here w/ those done rhymes, take a break it’s lunch time
Fuck you kid, my set-ups are wittier than ya punchlines
From what I’ve seen, you playin football should b illegal
Cuz D, sorry to say, but you’ve fell off worse than the Eagles
You’ll never be a vet, you won’t even win this by a hair
Sure u can reach 4 the stars
..............................problem is your never gonna get there

[Mimesis.]

The rules say due Pacific time, so I'll just type something up now.

Here's my links -

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247397
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247419
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247408
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247395

[Mimesis.]

So, I've beaten you twice total already.

Let's make it three.

You really think people like you as is?.. Fuck what you're left with
..Even the government is constantly trying to change Amendment
Join LLL? Fuck that, I'm known on the net, so I'ma be winnin, see
While ^ that's just the results of your last 3 battles in the league
On that topic.. fixing your fucking record? Ha.. man, nothin could
You're the second worst.. and still haven't battled someone good
And your audio is weak.. voice is gay like, man, tighten your tone
We're only saying Amen when you turn off your fuckin microphone
I don't know what's worse fag.. joining thinking you were hard, kid
Or how it's been over a year and you're STILL considered garbage

aight Mak may not be the best battler, but he's cool so lay off the dude,

Me? I consistently win battles everywhere.. im always rapping, see
The only thing YOU can take pride in is having a decent personality

[Mimesis.]

It's past the deadline now, so these are the verses for this battle.

Upping for votes.

[KempoMRK]

Makeveli, you didn't have enough to rival Daedal, stuff was quite simple and didn't hit all that hard, if you can get your wording better though you'll improve for sure.

Daedal, this was a nice verse, that LLL bar was hot, most of the verse was hot. Only bar I didn't like was the second worst bar, wasn't really feeling the way that was worded. Good verse though.

v/ Daedal

[Amendment]

wtf? since when was this league in pacific time?

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Get outta here w/ those done rhymes, take a break it’s lunch time
Fuck you kid, my set-ups are wittier than ya punchlines
Barely quoted this.

Vs.

You really think people like you as is?.. Fuck what you're left with
..Even the government is constantly trying to change Amendment
Join LLL? Fuck that, I'm known on the net, so I'ma be winnin, see
While ^ that's just the results of your last 3 battles in the league
And your audio is weak.. voice is gay like, man, tighten your tone
We're only saying Amen when you turn off your fuckin microphone
I don't know what's worse fag.. joining thinking you were hard, kid
Or how it's been over a year and you're STILL considered garbage
Me? I consistently win battles everywhere.. im always rapping, see
The only thing YOU can take pride in is having a decent personality
^Was all dope

v/Daedal

[Thor]

Don’t lie, ya wanted to be Draedal didn’t you, D?
Only delete R cuz his mom wont let em see those movies

vs

Me? I consistently win battles everywhere.. im always rapping, see
The only thing YOU can take pride in is having a decent personality
^lol ouch
Join LLL? Fuck that, I'm known on the net, so I'ma be winnin, see
While ^ that's just the results of your last 3 battles in the leagueI don't know what's worse fag.. joining thinking you were hard, kid
Or how it's been over a year and you're STILL considered garbage

One sided, D came basic and still won, he had ouchy personals

V/D

[Sobe]

You really think people like you as is?.. Fuck what you're left with
..Even the government is constantly trying to change Amendment
And your audio is weak.. voice is gay like, man, tighten your tone
We're only saying Amen when you turn off your fuckin microphone

^only lines in the battle worth mentioning..sorry mak

v/daedal

[Marvman]

v daedal

im in LLL i can vote right?


v/ daedal
v/daedal
v/daedal
v/daedal

cause

And your audio is weak.. voice is gay like, man, tighten your tone
We're only saying Amen when you turn off your fuckin microphone
I don't know what's worse fag.. joining thinking you were hard, kid
Or how it's been over a year and you're STILL considered garbage


Quote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
aight Mak may not be the best battler, but he's cool so lay off the dude,



Me? I consistently win battles everywhere.. im always rapping, see
The only thing YOU can take pride in is having a decent personality

vs nothing at all


and VC needs a tan niggez.

[Mimesis.]

5-0 Me.

[Demon Pyrokronix]

And your audio is weak.. voice is gay like, man, tighten your tone
We're only saying Amen when you turn off your fuckin microphone

vs

Nothing

I like how Daedal only uses personals but I thought a lot of them were played personals, like the decent personality and I didn't feel the delivery to be honest. You dropped better in the RVTT where you worded your punches way better. Mak I hated everything in your verse tbh, sorry but it was very simplistic and none of it really hit.