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  1. October 28th, 2005, 04:14 PM #1
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    Me......

    Didnt go up in the projects today
    Had a nice house so what can I say
    Nice family, good friends it was ok
    Not a gangster but people think so
    They talk shit and no one knows
    A little white kid couldnt be like me
    People gunna judge for what they see
    Baggy pants and a shirt size to big
    Thats what I wear thats what I dig
    They say I pack heat carry a gun
    They thinks its games they think its fun
    Words hurt but it dont get the best of me
    I dont really care dont give a shit
    They musta forgot who they messin wit
    I made a couple rhymes for some laughs
    They say that I wack and I cant rap
    What can I say people talk some smack
    Never heard them spit a single rhyme
    This aint my life just in my spare time
    People dont know me, I'm like T.I.
    Most dangerous weapon is peoples eyes
    It leads to conclusion and they aint right
    Keep to myself stayin up all night
    Workin at this game puttin up a fight
    Some of its lame and I admit it
    I may be garbage but its how i spit it
    I will succed it this game im willin to try
    Untill the day I die, im take whats mine
    As a first O.M. I want people to know me
    Cuz its like John Cena says You Just Cant See ME
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  2. October 28th, 2005, 04:15 PM #2
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    I know its pretty lame so give me some tips and what to work on......
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  3. October 28th, 2005, 06:08 PM #3
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    Lol Good Shit Used That Good Day From Ice Cube Beat Huh Chea I Know..Fix Your Bars Up Try Leveling It Out...Don't Use Three Words For Three Line's Make It Even..Vocab Was Okay Could Of Bin Better Lyrics We're Nice Here,,,,Structure Good Keep It Up
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  4. October 29th, 2005, 02:39 AM #4
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    ehhhhhhhh........ very basic ......got the concept.... its cool but everything else is ehhhh....blah............... try some more metas next time .......<-- to start
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  5. October 30th, 2005, 10:24 AM #5
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    i wasnt really feelin this one..topic was not that interesting
    flow was aiight..strucutre was wicked good but still not too good
    vocab was weak..complexity wasnt here..it seemed elementary rhymes
    upp everything from this drop like better vocab and ext. keep elevating
    oveerall 6.7/10..keep elevating..peace
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  6. October 30th, 2005, 04:44 PM #6
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on this will be closed. Read the thread at the top of the forum if you don't know how.

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  7. October 31st, 2005, 12:19 PM #7
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  8. October 31st, 2005, 12:23 PM #8
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    here is the other one
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  9. November 11th, 2005, 10:56 AM #9
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