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    Hey MA!

    Basically a free verse i have written




    I seen you from a mile away, smile as wide as day
    blue kool aide smile, over a girl ,should i cry this way?
    vehicles......two tired , i guess this is the midas way
    should i think or take mine this way , with our timeless play
    inconsistantant rhymes misplace, smooth sounds like chimes that grace
    no clocks, i can take you to a timeless place infinite...if you grace it right
    i love pacing right, these words will embrace ya life basic like tastin ice
    Shoes will never be a waste of life, i stand beyond a eclipse praise the light
    replace this life with sexing with faulty ho's, but all we know
    With my word's i could draw a painting of an evolving rose
    For you , but what i find appuling tho everytime i see you, continue stalling yo
    Sweetest since peaches and herb , leavin them herbs
    grounded, you're voice once sounded like birds tweaking
    the sunlight you are, hot as day left the curb leaking



    Will get links soon
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    this was iight..i mean this was quick..( too short)...the strucutee was off most of the time..rhymes were iight...a lil too simple....vocab was good...in sum places ( a few lines) had sum good....flow was not smooth..it was choppy most of the time...jus keep elevating...peace

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    Uppin, i think this was dope man...
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    feeling this shit we should do a collab trust I'm nice with songs like this ..............ne way had good strcture good line's and wordplay I liked this,was feeling the vibe.....pm me bout that collab trust I ain't a noob scrub

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