Treach P vs Roux

[Forlorn]

Allright post verse as soon as you can

[Forlorn]

As a trained wordsmith i 'm teachin you a rappin sermon/
actin as though theres a bounty on youre head, shootin you down like vermon/
But arnt you the lerical heritic, the lerical sinner/
aLthough i regret it now battlin you is as borin as seeing what my neighbor ate for dinner/
There is also no dobt whos gunna walk away the winner/
Your work is alwayss work in progress/
You like the hyena runnin from a lioness/
you dont even need to read his work to no that mine is the finest/
You got no original lines, youre a lerical thief/
you a pitiful peasant, while i be the chief/
Livin on the streets, tryin to sell marijuarna leaf

[Forlorn]

30 lines max

[roux]

obliterate your words from the earth
merely screamin fetus better off a still birth
rhymes so old they got white hair and beards
i explode with the verbs that bust out ya ears
my gravitational pull will have ya makin a fool
out of ya self on th dance floor
doin back spins runnin man and more
highly animated while you just be decomposin
got the potion and the lotion and the right to cause comotion
explicative is indicative like a shive in your head
turn your shit into a civ
devour word power golden shower on your flower

[roux]

uppin it now that i spit

[A2Z]

aight my vote goes for roux... treach u killed ur self with this line:

Your work is alwayss work in progress/
You like the hyena runnin from a lioness/

Dude, if you have to force a line, then go back and rewrite it, dont force a rhyme

vote= roux

[Soul Theory]

yo Ima vote on this if ya'll vote on my battle against X Ecution . . . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=36841 . . . DEAL . . . ?

[roux]

ok

[roux]

ups, we need votes

[Xplicit]

i wasn't feelin either of these, but i g2g w/ treach because he had more flow, roux jus have urs flow more and urs will be tight

[Forlorn]

Yo, fuck east, north, south and west this cats only on your backside/
tryin to be a player askin if he can ride/
set him up for pure annilation/
Because hes too scared of another confrontation/
yo, i expose his stupidity,i be on the dancefloor?
post your next verse so i can burn you some more/
youre 29 let go you should be retired/
i grab the mic and leave you straight fired/
fuck a still birth you were born with down syndrome/
cry as soon as you leave 10 metres away from home/
when in roam, burn this kat, it will makeyourself feel better/
29 still lives at home mum probaly still make him his sweater/
you just got burnt by someone half your age,its a losing battle your fighting, turn the page/
open to the next chapter =retirement

[Forlorn]

we need more votes

[roux]

upin for votes

[Forlorn]

tying