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    talking about life keystyle

    im dreading the moment that society dies
    and waiting for the moment we finally rise
    leaving this life of drama how do we sign over lives
    fuck that im over ride this system and start my own
    and ride this road to where ever im taken
    forever im making a diffrence so listen im preferably wasting
    3 minutes if your mentaly waiting, im outspoken as heart
    i'm opened apart so view all my inner thoughts that i drop
    so see the rawness, the truth in bold this ruthless road
    these outspoken words with the newest flow
    the truest brew, yea life is rude from cold to warm
    you'll never be warned so you need to be strong
    im not leading you on if you think lifes so great
    then im just reading it wrong i need to start re-reading the laws
    why my aways busted when there looking at me
    life aint sugar and sweets, its fucking roten
    from taunton to boston all the way to brockton and harlem

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    this wasn't very good, ya rhyme scheme was bad, and ya visual was bad,.......my advice is to geta lil help or take more time to inject thought to ya peices,......but nice try yo, keep dropping
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