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    Got That Sumthin

    All those niggaz alwayz say i got that sumthin
    maybe they were high when we where bluntin
    I have no clue but i have the greatest gift
    look ladies, i got the greatest magic stick
    oh yea- oh yea, i got that charm magically
    i can make sex turn into a fuckin tradgety
    i'll make all the jealous niggaz be mad at me
    I got that sumthin you know what it is..
    pop- pop- pop like a bottle of Dr. Fizz..
    i had this sumthin ever since a was a kid
    Dont be hatin dont be jealous of me....
    cuz G, it just came to me naturally.....
    and all the girls now are alwayz after me

    (chorus x 2)
    I got that sumtin you know that stuff
    my gift is big and really, really tough
    we can get on anytime you like
    and i'm ready to sexually strike (o yea)

    These girl are all over me like i'm a celebrity
    and all the girls wishin they were in bed wit me
    This life is better than Skribble's no doubt
    now lyric's life is what i'm talkin about
    sexy gift and you know i got that thing
    that can make your sex rages do DING!
    i got bling bling up to the sky, no lie
    why would i lie, i'm seriosuly a real guy
    dont deny this life is seriosuly really good
    way better than poppin gats in da hood
    all you know is that i got that sumthin
    and now you can hear that bed thumpin
    in the apartement, wakin neighbors
    i have glow in the dark condoms..
    i can play light sabors, i got darth vador's
    yea-yea...i no what this chick like
    and she know what my dick's like

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    First things first. Don't write in small font, it's extremely irritating and makes your shit hard to read. Having said that...

    You had pretty good flow throughout. That was the best part of your verse, and the only good part really. Otherwise, it's nothing I haven't seen a billion times before. Shit about being a ladies man and a ganster gets real fucking boring, especially if you read the more unique shit in here.

    So yea..good flow, just work on dropping more unique pieces.

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    Woa..multies were pretty good....i'm impressed wit dat....umm....the rhymes were good....topic was a lil too firmiliar......but you made this peice seem better than the other ones i've seen....nice flow..smooth and strcuutre was even all the way...verses were good...chorus was cool...goodd rop overall 8.5/10...keep it up..peace

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