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Thread: Keys To Success - (Written Voices ~crew collab)

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    Keys To Success - (Written Voices ~crew collab)

    Kaotic.Theory = Navy
    Spekz = Blue
    -Tum Tum- = Green
    ~WhiteOut~ = Dark Red
    Twixsin = Purple

    Key's To Success
    never scared of the demon who creates struggles
    i will survive not physically, but with my brains muscle
    in the mind im a mutant of my own world & universe
    i control who makes it, & who creates the failures curse
    i am who breaks it, my own God sitting upon the throne
    the lord of all strength, who sends the losers home
    but im a successor, my way of survival is unstoppable
    trying to put a halt to my 'keys to success' is impossible


    strong mind'd physically tough the road ahead is unusually rough
    no walk in the park, think what u must but little effort wont be enough
    Existent patience, time with a mind frame of consistent determination
    decision making hard work eye'n the prize with persistent concentration
    pushing forth toward a goal that you work to accomplish
    as years diminish coming true a wish that you finally finish
    no time for wasting life's absorbed to keep striving for more
    your best for life so u are granted with the keys........
    ............. to success's door


    Believe your true state of mind, and deflate hater time
    It may be locked now but keys reflect in your eye shine
    Written Voices in every line, relieve your stress and relax
    Step for step carry yourself, only you know your true stat
    In fact walk over the rest, don't fret, think only as a test
    Repressed versions are left behind, stand up your next
    Determination stressed on your mind, chill don't obsess
    Believing in Yourself is the the ultimate Key To Success


    Determination is Key and Relentlesness is a Vital attribute to Achievements...
    One Ounce of Weakness or Uncertainty can dash Hopes of receiving this...
    Head Held High with Glory Bestowed Upon the Soul never Looking down...
    Failure Doesnt Exist... In a world of Determination it Remains to be found...
    Unbreakable, never Crumble under Pressure I do what it Takes...
    Self Esteem Highly Rated, if owned, then a better Individual It makes...
    Always Turn the other Cheek and Respect will come with Ease...
    The Definition is Success and all these Attributes are the Keys...


    not the time i messed up you're Christmas dress
    or let whirlwinds of emotion sweep away the press
    i left a mess and you knew it, now you're not here
    i fear that it all fell apart even though i had a seer
    shear the last paper note from you're heart and tell me
    show the cancer along with the answer that plagues she
    threw this dark tunnel we can walk with a pocket of clarity
    a rarity a night so warm, my keys to success is a calamity

    rammed forth for not God but thee... my moon
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    Twixsin ur part is hot the rest of it sounds like an motivational tape

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    Dope collab guys, prouda' you guys.

    LOL!

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    ^^lol

    rize 4 some feedback!!

    thanx 4 the very small FB may and drock

    lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by D rOcK
    Twixsin ur part is hot the rest of it sounds like an motivational tape
    a motivational tape?

    go back to kindergarden before you start dissing people.

    good work people... *reading* will leave feed after i set up my new mic.
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    LMAO wordness at the newb tryin to diss......and yea nice collab...WV = DOPE
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    uppin... c mon people... real effort here... 5X

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    people are lazy...specially in frontlines/and in here...BLAH!!

    hit this up
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    I liked this piece alot guys.Really dope.I have seen better but this really had me going.I liked how you started off.First no imagery than slowly getting to it.The vocab was pretty good but at parts of your diferent verses some lacked'The structure was ok,some lines were streched.Also i kinda luved the fact at the end of each verse you guy made it ended using the 'Keys to success'.That was good,but honestly it coulda beenn better if at the end it only used that.The middle part was good but kaotic started it off better which kept me still wanting to read.Whiteout had the best vocab,but the way he used it wasnt very good.Twix's part was awesome.I loved the imagery and the use of vocab,and how he worded it.Tum tum was ok,cuz it had what all of you guys had,but not enuff.Overall i liked this alot and i'd enjoy to see more

    ~1~

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    "Battle Of The Gods:The Sacrifice."

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    Also can any of y'all also peep the boombox.Thanx.

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    Little more feed guys.... this was a big piece
    Roc-A-Fella !

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=246957

    hit that up^^

    aight, this was a dope collab, cool topic, and flow was strong throughout most of it. the vocab was pretty good, and the imagery was strongest at the end. some lines were a little stretched. overall i think twix had the dopest part of the collab, stay up WV, keep posting nd peep Gods Of Destruction (link in siG)

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    thanks for the love...


    upping for more feedback.
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    DOpe..Not leavin hella feedback but Still dope...Peep Keyra video in sig

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