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    Gods Of Destruction

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3411463

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post3411473

    Were given space; to live and make; kids who take
    The world through fate which swirls our face; learn optic traits
    Visions of a life so vivid, clear… tempted to drift a smear
    Of Mischief, dishin fear… to hearts while wisdom disappears
    A place of sugar coated smiles, where gratitude will go a mile
    Where the burglars are the only ones who’ll pull a trigger on a dial
    Our minds grow bigger for awhile, while our body shapes
    Then oddly we wait until it cringes to let our mind escape
    But the times it takes from birth to death
    To understand; hurts my head..
    asking if its worth it. Do we deserve to work the steps?

    Paint your perfect picture.. Colors lies and fade the blush
    Its such a touchy topic, So sense of logic isn’t touched
    Instead it’s a sense of profit. Money u need to survive
    But the sun and seven seas agree its funny your alive
    Living when you know you die, still you roam and try
    You feel obligated to give it your all before you die
    But why? Because your trained that that’s the way to live
    If I had a day to give for every disobey; id run away from sin
    When you leave enough people curious they turn anger
    Into a weapon that hurts strangers with a flirt of danger
    Enough souls leave their bodies and they take over
    Like the three of us who crowned ourselves a make over
    There is no peace to death every soul that leaves its chest
    Has to rest knowing they lived a lie through every single breath
    So of course were upset and were closing the gate
    Not knowing your fate is a growing mistake that will slowly deflate
    The world will suffer… no soul will ever rise again
    Instead it will spend its time with sin trapped alive to sit
    And truly feel the grasp of evil.. Its an evil you know
    The same evil that tricks your mind into the people you grow
    There is no heaven for you... no religious support
    Your left with nothing but forgiveness after your own abort
    And are finally able to rise above earth and gaze upon
    A maze of wrong with days, so long they; stay till dawn
    Its time for change.. And since your already living a lie
    around laws petty and light
    if they talked would be heavy on goodbyes
    Fuck your lives! Swirl the clouds and burn the grounds
    we'll Turn your life around so that all your smiles frown
    Let darkness cover the sun and leave the planet hiding
    Behind the shadow which doesn’t take anything lightly
    The end is near for all of you… deaths in days or weeks
    When you get here ask for us.. Cuz we saved you a seat


    this is the end of the world as we know it...

    Gods of Destruction
    Last edited by TheKing; November 8th, 2005 at 04:55 PM

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    wow

    i am slept on

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    this verse was good...i liked the flow alot its what ke[t me interested in the peice...your structure was okay but it coul be worked on but other than that i think this was a very good,descriptive peice...well done keep writting.

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    topic was insane...i was feelin it...nicely done man

    complexity was aiight but rhymes were good and the stroy theme was cool

    i enjoyed it..nice drop..flow was smooth and strcuutre was good..

    keep it up...peace

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    Your first link doesn't work, please edit in one that does.

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    done^^^

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    Your first link still doesn't work, please edit in one that does.

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    omg...... aight brb

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    yo i was feelin that whole joint man ur vocab was there u had good structure and u spit excellent i have nothing bad to say so imma say this keep it up aight man lookin forward to more of ur drops

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    i wanna do a collab with u so if u want to u could just pm me aight son

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    very nice topic here i like the view you took on it... and you also had the flow to go along with it... dude nice peice here... you should check out wilderness crew... just cause i wanna make it the topical writing/ audio spitting people who are active... nice peice though... and just an offer :P

    keep it up.

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