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Thread: PLEASE don't sleep... My BEST yet...

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    LionFire
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    PLEASE don't sleep... My BEST yet...

    been a while since I actually finished a project... lazy bastard...

    here's my latest... still usin' low budget equipment, but my production is gettin' a little better...

    HAS NOT BEEN MASTERED...

    [MUSIC]http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=272914&songID=3055996[/MUSIC]

    please visit my page and vote hot or flop... all feedback will be returned...

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    LionFire
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    up... I gave feedback on a bunch of cats...

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    good shit man..

    you did a good job on this..

    props duke..

    -10

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    LionFire
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    up... been givin' mad feedback, help me out here y'all!!!

    Last edited by LionFire; November 7th, 2005 at 02:56 PM

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    good quality and good message i can feel that hundred percent fam no doubt im liking the overall vibe of your track

    i think ud be better on a faster beat but aside from that ur good

    drop me reply wen u get a chance fam

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    LionFire
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    thanks a lot... I appreciate it... I think I did reply on one of your tracks...

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    Listenin...

    Beat sounds good so far...quality is pretty good...lyrics are meaningful and I'm feeling them em...flow is decent, a little choppy at times, but you switch it up...good shit...keep droppin.

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    Trae Duce
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    yo this was good man...the beat was really nice man i was feelin it...da lyrics were hard man i like that shit...ya flow was on beat and ya delivery was good...overall nice track man keep it up

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    LionFire
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    thanks y'all... y'all had some nice shit too...

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    nice intro...good melody..
    dope emotion..i like the beat..epic shit..
    nice flow, laid back shit...
    you articulate your words well..
    i like the realness of this...seems honest..
    chorus is nicee...you have a good voice (if thats you singin)..
    overall above average song..props..

    return the fav.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=243858
    Peace

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    LionFire
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    yes, that is me singin' on all the vocals... I did like 12 different tracks on just vocals... thanks for the feed... this is about 75% honest to god and 25% creative storytelling... I didn't ever ACTUALLY try to kill myself, but I was honestly |--| this close until God stepped in...

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    This is pretty nice track
    Solid flow
    Kinda like some of ems shit
    Good story telling and emotion
    You a solid singer too. This is a good track man all around
    2nd verse was tight
    Props on this dawg

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    i like it man! shit is right! keep it goin, and check me out if you want.
    Check me out


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    LionFire
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    thanks again...

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    i'm feeling this song...

    the hook is lovely..

    i feel your emotion in this..

    your flow is consistent and the content was very invoking..

    this was a nice song..

    2nd listen..

    holla
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247564

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